a birthmark & a taboo
i am a lavish smile of smirk
you incubated me & my head
with soils of murder and hatred
sins of monster & coal of coals.
to kiss your dark soul
i swim like a starfish,
concurrent currents floating
inside my solitary knee-bone
see it, feel it, sniff it
chop it. chop it. chop it
it Shall again appear with
half sun and half moon rays.
like a starfish singing,
unveiling the balmy metaphors
crooked though plumbed
in your anxious fingers of blood
in your anxious mouth of dirt.
Β©MVS
NaPoWriMo#24
This is awesome, very well written. Star fish yeah it cleanses and degrade these by feeding on it..
Wowsome,… πππππππππ
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Wowsome! Such a great remark Aquib.
Thank you so much.
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Always my pleasure. Great work. πππ
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Fabulous. You never fail to amaze me with your literary genius.
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Honestly, I am not proud of my writings off late. But you once again.β€οΈβ€οΈ
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It’s really good. You are really good. ππ
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Bye bye , take care.
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You too love.
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This beyond wonderful. Again, you have amazed me..
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Aww.β€οΈβ€οΈ
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A birthmark & a tattoo. Great line to open this piece. Well done MVS.
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Appreciate your stay here. Thank you!
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Simply pure, and powerful. Perfect.
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How kind.
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Oh this is excellent
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As usual, of very high standard. What if itβs somewhat above me! This is from my favourite blogger π
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Vivid imagination ππ
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Thank you so much.
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Wow dear this made me speechless, loved it!
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Oh, Soiba.
You are the sweetest.
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Your endings never fail to stun me. I love the last two lines of this poem in particular. Have I mentioned that you use repetition exceedingly well? π
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Haha. Yeah, you are so correct.
I love doing that.
Thanks.π
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Awesomely dark…well done
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Many thanks.π
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Your analogies always amazes me every time I read your proses. π
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That’s because you are a genuine reader. Thank you.
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My pleasure
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Amazing!! π
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Your play on words and imagery are astounding. Bravo!
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Aww .
Thank you so much.
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You’re kindly welcome!
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“unveiling the balmy metaphors” I feel the joy when I get your metaphors! ππππππ
You do it so amazingly! β€ β€ β€
You're poems made my day(or night I should say π :P) Good Night! β€ β€
I intend to continue my venture in your posts in the coming nights(and days)! Does it look like I am stalking? XD XD XD! Sorry for the spamming. But I really really enjoy your works. Missed it while I was away from WordPress. β€ β€
Btw you do know that I am @dracarys on Instagram right?(so I'm calling you didi here as well. remember I asked your permission once on Instagram?) π π π π
Good Night!(I know you could make it sound sososo much sweeter with your gorgeous words and I would love to read that, but I come with a simple Good Night didi! β€ β€ β€ β€ β€ )
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What have you been doing Charisma? You have literally blown me away with all your messages flooding my blog. You made me cry today, damn.
Thank you love.
You are one of a kind.β€οΈ
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