Into You.

I ate you like the black spot of the moon
splitting the silence
and dissolving the quietness
in the peaches and apples,
I asked your thorn too
with an ebb blooming onto my eyelid
softness cracks, butter lips
Jupiter, Mars dancing
I ate you still, coating myself with wax
I see you behind the slick cotton sheets
where memories slap my tongue
I see you, Yes…I do.

I thrive and wrap and surrender
my soliloquy white silence
in the flash and soils
and I see still myself sinking deep
into your coconuty eyes.
A conjuncture of Aurora,
Repeat, repeat, repeat.


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my valiant soul

A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times. Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied. My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others. Curator of Olive Skins.

50 thoughts on “Into You.”

  1. Oh, the sweetness of love in these words ❤ Some fruits we consume over and over, repeating the ritual, just like eating your words. Your love poetry is as splendid as your dark words. ❤ ❤ ❤

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  2. “and I see still myself sinking deep
into your coconuty eyes.”
    These line are love 😍
    I love the emotions this piece evoke. To be lost in the one we love. Feeling of oneness. A connection. Perfection.
    Absolutely Gorgeous ❤️

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  3. ” splitting the silence and dissolving the quietness in peaches and apples” you are master in these,how can you imagine these lines.Sometimes I feel like you involve in Every word you wrote,I think you live the life of everything you mention.

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      1. ,yeah but as a reader if I say it’s average,you may feel little bad know!! I don’t have courage to criticise like that.So I just mentioned about one line which I liked others are easy to to understand.

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