I ate you like the black spot of the moon
splitting the silence
and dissolving the quietness
in the peaches and apples,
I asked your thorn too
with an ebb blooming onto my eyelid
softness cracks, butter lips
Jupiter, Mars dancing
I ate you still, coating myself with wax
I see you behind the slick cotton sheets
where memories slap my tongue
I see you, Yes…I do.
I thrive and wrap and surrender
my soliloquy white silence
in the flash and soils
and I see still myself sinking deep
into your coconuty eyes.
A conjuncture of Aurora,
Repeat, repeat, repeat.
Oh, the sweetness of love in these words ❤ Some fruits we consume over and over, repeating the ritual, just like eating your words. Your love poetry is as splendid as your dark words. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you so much.
Appreciate your words.❤️
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My pleasure, love. ❤
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“and I see still myself sinking deep into your coconuty eyes.”
These line are love 😍
I love the emotions this piece evoke. To be lost in the one we love. Feeling of oneness. A connection. Perfection.
Absolutely Gorgeous ❤️
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Honestly, this is too simple and blunt I believe.
But beauty lies in the eye of the beholder.😊
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It’s simple and yet it makes me remind of his eyes.
❤️❤️
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“and I see still myself sinking deep into your coconuty eyes.
A conjuncture of Aurora”
Incredibly beautiful💖
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Oh, thanks Eli.
Missed so many wonderful writings here.
Thank you for your kind words though.❤️
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You’re always welcome, Devika🌻💖
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This is a great poem. So much to read into, but not needing to to enjoy it
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Thank you so much but I wasn’t sure what your last line meant.
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It means your poem is enjoyable to read even if someone isn’t able to read deeper into it or fully understand every line.
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Thank you
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I could read this, repeat, repeat! Lovely.
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Yiee.
❤️❤️
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💜🌺
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What a wonderful opening line!
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Glad you enjoyed it.
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This is very lovely!! 🙂
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Oh YES! Repeat! Repeat! Repeat! Love it
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Haha.
Welcome back.😊
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Thanks lol
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“I ate you still, coating myself with wax” . Somehow this resonates, stimulates …<3
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Thank you Diana.
I hope you feel that quench too.
Many thanks for reading my work.
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You are a prolific delight ❤
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And you are a sweetheart.❤️
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Ah, sweetest of compliments. I shall enter the warmth and swim in it!
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Aye!!
❤️
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Oh just look how cute you are! 🌹😊
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❤️❤️
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💜💜
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Lovely as always to read your poetry! 🙂
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Hi. Thanks PD
❤️
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Lovely poem!
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” splitting the silence and dissolving the quietness in peaches and apples” you are master in these,how can you imagine these lines.Sometimes I feel like you involve in Every word you wrote,I think you live the life of everything you mention.
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This is only okayish I believe as I have lost my dark sides as for now.
But thank you sincerely.
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,yeah but as a reader if I say it’s average,you may feel little bad know!! I don’t have courage to criticise like that.So I just mentioned about one line which I liked others are easy to to understand.
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And last line REPRAT,REPEAT, REPEAT,THIS SOUNDS TOO GOOD.like rap of a song
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Your poetry is stunning 😍
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Thank you Emma.
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Awesome poem! I see you too, yes I do, all coated with wax. ☺💛
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Thanks, sir
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All you poems have a classic quality. This one is no exception. Deeply sensual and hauntingly beautiful, it follows the traditional vein between food and love. The desire to devour our lover, to consume him/her wholly and make him/her part of our essence.
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Thank you, that is really an amazing thing to say and I am deeply grateful to you dear.
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coconuty eyes – это очень красиво 🙂
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Thank you for your warm words
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Exquisite beauty of words🔥❤
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Thank you Pankhudi.
Much love.
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