It’s like a sad part of my levitating body.
My fingers have a soft tendency to nurture, to sense pain.
and I sit on the lonely roads to pick up a saddened heart, to heal it.
sometimes, I have a feeling I am solid.
Solid like a vintage door, unbreakable.
Imperishable, who can swallow darkness inside darkness?
So, I produce light out of darkness.
I act like a mother to him, as well.
With clearwing moth like a skin of his,
sewing the gasps and sighs.
His body is made of a fallen moon, I believe so.
And at times, I am confused with the methods of love.
He is a rotating axis on my forehead.
he has leaked, the times I was leaking too.
And I kept quiet and sewed him again and again.
Like a silent prayer of pure holistic clouds.
I watch,
my clavicle stuttering with the omen of noises.
Nothing is a flattened lie, but a departure.
My eyes are anxious now, to capture your lilting lips.
I watch you as you get healed now,
as I protect you now.
You are now an absent face of simmering smiles of the sky.
#Napowrimo 3
Wonderfully written .
I just love this:
“I sit on the lonely roads to pick up a saddened heart, to heal it.”
Sad and reflective but also with hope.
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Yes, hope also.
Thank you for reading.🌼
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My favourite too! Gorgeous! 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Your sensitive words go straight to my heart.
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I am happy to do so.❤️
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Glorious…
Master craftsmanship.
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Thank you so much.🌼
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A pleasure!
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this is so deep – loved the twists and turns and the uproar you created in your poignant poetry
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Positive, negative.. everything!!
Thank you for reading Shantanu.🙏
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My pleasure always
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Oh the simmering smiles of sky!!
You paint a beautiful imagery, dear.
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I was a bit skeptical though!
Thanks a lot.
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It’s so good to read.
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Thank you dear
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Why do I get the feeling
My recent poem and your this poem of yours has some connection.
I loved it to the core.
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I felt it too. Strange no?
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Exactly. And we’ve neither tell each other about it, nor discussed anything about it ever. Still.
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Yeah. There is that connection. A bit similarity!
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Yes. As if they are tied with each other even before we made a meaning out of it.
And when we posted individually, they gave us the sense.
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That makes sense.
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All I am gonna say is- have hope. That’s all 😦
Such a wonderful post dr ❤ ❤
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Haha. You can say that
Love to you.
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You too dr 🙂 🙂
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As the black and white come to life…
Words live
We (poets) give them a soul
And by a single blow, life befalls man…
Its a lovely piece👐
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Thanks!
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I sit on the lonely roads to pick up a saddened heart, to heal it.
What a beautiful line!
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Thank you so much for appreciating! Appreciate your words.
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beautifully captivating
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Thank you Joey!
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Nice one
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Thanks!
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Your welcome
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Beautiful piece
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🙏🙏
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This is such a masterpiece. 🙂
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Thanks for such uplifting words.
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You can define sadness in such an unique way.
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Yeah, I hope to do that. My poetry is known for that only. Is it getting weird now?
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No not really, sadness isn’t everyone’s cup of tea. And you are so inspiring.
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Such beautiful lines!! I get speechless reading your poetry really …
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Ain’t you are sweetheart as I say?!❤️
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Really nicely written. Thank you.
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No, thanks for reading!
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this is really touching…beaut!
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Thank you. Beautiful.
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so beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you dear.
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& you.
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Yaar I love this ♥️
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Glad you do.😊
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Wow, and after the picture, the aesthetic feelings you pulled with your words.
The moment I read the line that everyone has appreciated in the comments.
“I sit on the lonely roads to pick up a saddened heart, to heal it.”
I literally couldn’t stop these words coming out of me, “But who would pick your own, who would come and heal it?”
And then I realised what a wonder your writing does.
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Aww, thank you for such detailed and an honest feedback. I am so glad to hear your words, bro 🙏
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It’s my pleasure! 😊 It’s always good to read your poetry, fills me with inspiration.
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So so amazing! Wonderful! 😊👏
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Thankyou.
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You’re welcome!:)
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