“Paper has more patience than People”
I have heard enough about the grey letters dancing, leaping
on the white pure sheets,
I have seen her tears also pooling up inch by inch and forming a galaxy
at each side of the page
Turgescent drops of ice circulates, rhymes and drops as she swipes the cotton cheeks
She stifled a numb voice, a queer quietness. Lost in the archaic voices.
Ataxia on her knees, ataxia in her throat
a vague remembrance of ash and wine
she twirls the pages and eats it like a healthy dinner
Insoluble mud often teaches you life beyond death
making you reflect reflections, the screams and the smudged mascara
she speaks now, trembling voice like that of the old-fashioned stethoscope
a heartbeat yellow and fractured
startling. Survival. Unflagging
She resides here in these brown paper of dust and pain.
She resides in your vertebrae, like fungus
she travels quietly in our disgust words,
She is us.
«©MVS
My mind, is blown. And I, am speechless.
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Wow! Thanks, dear one.
Really appreciate your words.
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This surely is one of your best, can be read again and again as the words become different voices each time you do
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That means so much.
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The power of written word is spiritual and restorative! Especially your dear words… another amazing piece Devika ♥️
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It’s your beauty that sees so much love in my words.
Thank you Rulla.
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It’s your beauty that allows you to write so passionately! You’re welcome love.
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Oh.❤️
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Much love ♥️
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Very nice and well said!!
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Thank you.
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Complex and hearty, like a broth of diverse flavors that does nothing but satisfy the palate.
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Ah, that is an intense line D.
❤️
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Insoluble mud often teaches you life beyond death – and every line that followed tugged deep! This is beyond anything that is called writing.
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Oh, PD your words always mean so much to me.❤️
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Lots of Love.
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Beautifully Written
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Much appreciated.
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Excellent work
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Thanks!
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😃
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It tugs your soul. Enchanting as usual.
Great work Devika.
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Thank you.
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Pleasure 🙂
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I would love to be in your mind just for a day just to see how you come up with something like this.
Love it!
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Thank you Braeden.
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Welcome
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You are truly one of my favourites here on wordpress… always enjoy reading your work… another amazing post❤
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a fantastic words of poem
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Thanks!!
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This is splendid!! Mind blowing!😍😍👏👏
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Means a lot.
Thank you Parth!
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Most welcome!😊
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I love reading your poems!
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Nice
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Bloody brilliant!! Love it!
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To have a word of encouragement from you means a lot.
I truly love your writings and I am honored to have your kind words.
Many thanks, Roy!
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Thanks to you too for your kind words!! You’re great writer!
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This is just perfect.. my hearrrrttt…😍💖💘
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Thanks love.❤️
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Brilliant piece of writing. deep & intense
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Thank you love.
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This is definitely one of your best (I haven’t gone through them all, though). A rare gem. I read it multiple times. The flow, the rhythm, the words — everything seems to come off very naturally. And, there’s something to this one that just connects, makes it stand out from the rest. *Claps*
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Yes, that special element I would say is the truth that perhaps you liked also.
I am grateful to have your words.
Many thanks!
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Hmmmm.
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From Anne Frank to involuntary control of muscles “she is us”. Well done!
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