“I crave your mouth, your voice, your hair”— Pablo Neruda
In the sleepless nights of thunder and laughter,
I craved the shape of your mouth,
where the butterflies built a rainbow
soaking in the solemn orange skies.
Tranquility glitters as my reflection
and my anklets clamour my tears.
Oh, the moon weeps, upon the last September
where I was here and you still a dream.
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A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
Curator of Olive Skins.
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Wonderful poem valiant,
“”where the butterflies built a rainbow”” …very creative
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I am obliged to hear from you.
Thank you!
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Beautiful.
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Thankyou so much.
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👧❤ you are Welcome.
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Very intense and well written!
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So glad you liked the intensity.
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Loved it and the details. The way you describe is very creative!
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Thank you so much for paying a kind read.
Means a lot!
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Not an expert but I like reading yours
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That means everything to me sir!
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That’s so very cute. Make me so very happy. Thank you for the kind words
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I am awestruck! This may be my very favorite of your poems. And you’ve written so many of them that I have adored. I saw the title and got excited, thinking “This one has got to be good!” You exceed my expectations. And I don’t think I’m biased because September is my fave month lol.
Thank you for always sharing.
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Okay, I never expected that much of praise for my this work.
I did not feel it can touch my reader that immensely and if it did I am really thankful to you for resonating with it.
Means a lot.
Thankyou so much!
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Believe it. Enjoy it. ☺️🌺 I can’t think of anything else to say without repeating myself. But you’re quite welcome!!
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Intense and bewitching👌❤
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You my darl.
❤❤❤
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And you are mine😚
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You’ve hit the mark again Devika,
regarding romance and relationships
as only you can.
September leaves
tumble down
the street like
broken butterflies
she is the light
that brings
the rainbow
to the storm
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Aw..
That’s really exciting!
Thank you, Forrest!
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Ahhh, your writing is amazing!!!!!
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You make me blush.❤
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Awesome! Your Challenge is up on my blog – If Time Shatters.
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Thanks.
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Welcome and hope you are well
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Sure I am.
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Great
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One can feel the close connection between the speaker and the subject. This ties in nicely with your previous post and is a continuation of those yearnings. memories are powerful entities, capable of taking us on this dream trips. Beautifully written!
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So correct you are. This is perhaps the continuation of yearnings and memories.
If you could connect that, I am happy to know I did a good part in depicting that emotion.
Thank you once again!
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You are most welcome.
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stunning!
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Thank you.
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The emotions are overwhelming. Your words are always so enthralling ❤️
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Hi Priya!
Hope you are well and much thanks for your soothing words.
😊
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Autumn is all we experience around us now and this plays best version thrown at folks. Moreover you seem to like Pablo Neruda’s Poetry as for sure is in my case.
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I am a big time mr. Neruda’s fan.
He is simply my cup of tea.
Fabulous .
Thanks for dropping by!
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You’re outstanding. ❤
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Aww.❤❤❤
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❤
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Woah, wow! WOW!
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Thank you so much.
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Don’t know how I missed this one… it is beautiful…a sorrowful kind of beauty as memories are re opened
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No worries, sweetie!
Somehow off late I have been trying to dig into your blog too but I feel something has changed there, am I right?
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Yes u r 🙂 I deleted the old one and now trying something new 🙂
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Oh. Would be looking forward to your new words!
Good luck.❤️
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You really make it seem really easy with your presentation however I find this topic to be really one thing that I think I might never understand. It kind of feels too complicated and very broad for me. I’m looking forward to your next publish, I will try to get the dangle of it!
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I am happy at least I can intrigue your thought process and make you wait for my next poems.
Hope you detangle it well enough.
Thank you for paying a read.
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