
I felt the apocalypse,
For I am the one under the blanket of disgrace
Vapours of sullen emotions clamouring the disgust chaos,
I knitted their faces, from core to core
till I knew the point blank.
The whole world, dreaming the dead leaves
an intoxication of swollen wisdom,
For time establishes time.
Reality bites my skin, leaving a yellow mark
a mark of insolent skins,
a mark of insolent smiles.
Dipping in the sublime extensions of rose petals,
churns my thoughts like a needle.
Poking and creating.
The aftermath shall be a mystery.
Β©My Valiant Soul
Oh how stupendous!!!!
And the aftermath shall indeed be a mystery…so beautifully poeticπ
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Thankyou so much for your sweet words.π
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Beautifulππππ¨
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This is wow. And I’ve written a poem with the exact same name!! π
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I would love to check it out.
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My first ever non zombie apocalypse π
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Means a lot.
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This is very beautiful! β€
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Thankyou so much.
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I close my eyes after reading your poems, the image you paint in words decorated on a canvas so awe inspiring.
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I am deeply thrilled to hear such a lovely comment.
Your comments are always valuable!
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As I am sure others who read your words do.
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I agree…MVS poems are like paintings..many hues, angles, many a stories hidden within
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You have descibed my words with so much love.
Thanks a lot.
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Not an expert but I know this is too good
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Thank you!
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You are always welcome
Your follower π
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Canvas of words falls short… rather a wall of thought.
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Thank you.
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Amazing poem!! I especially love that last line!!!!
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Aww.β€β€
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Amazing… great imagery. and wordplay
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Honored!
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Anytime…
Good enough, was compelled to share on kuoobiediaries Facebook page. . . π
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It is mind-blowing the kind of elements you bring in to create the feel!
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So nice to hear from my dear friend.π
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All my pleasure π
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Loved the poem.
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Thanks my beautiful friend.
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Making the apocalypse personal demonstrates the intensity of emotion living inside of you.Just as the final words in this piece promise a post-apocalyptic mystery, all your poetry contains an element of mystery as you offer only glimpses of the soul burning beneath the words.
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Thankyou for peeping into it exactly the way it should have been with a hint of mystery.
Honored to have you as my critics.
Much thanks.
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You are most welcome.
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It’s a stunning piece !!
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So happy to know you liked it.π
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I certainly loved it β€οΈ
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