My skin coloured umbrella texture,
A polaris to inhuman substance
Extending in the North,
Like that shining star.
My red lip, like a stolen piece of a gem.
The duality of mermaid fins,
Stumbling, swimming, breathing.
I see it all.
Who am I?
The eccentric waves of ocean,
Inside my oceanic soul,
Flutters the depth of my eyelid
Narrowing my eyesight, blurry smoke.
And there exists a vast fountain of charcoal visions.
Unknown, insatiable flower petals
Choking on dead soil.
-My Valiant Soul.
wow. great work
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Thankyou!
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The question amid all the imagery really tells the story, linking the piece to the title. Sometimes when we look inward, we don’t always recognize what we see. I really like the idea of a self-portal whether it is reading back through previous writing, meditating and simply deep thought.
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I feel it is so important to glance oneself always.
We need that for true thinking.
And you agreeing with that gives me surety.
Thank you fir your uplifting words.
Much appreciated!
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Introspection is paramount. You are most welcome.
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Every line is a complete poem in itself.
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Your comment is like a gem dear Y!:)
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You sparkle !
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Love and hugs!😊😊
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Back at you. 🤗😘
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Oh, that’s a wonderful poem. ☺️👍
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Mysterious and wondrous verses all over again👌👌👌
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So glad that you liked it.😊
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Thamkyou so much
😊😊
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Are you travelling to some doom place?? I like the words oceanic soul though..and fluttering eye lids. Well connected
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I am not travelling anywhere.
It’s all in my mind, which I am unclear about too! Like a mystery perhaps.
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I know….everything that you expressed is related to your mind and your feelings and the situation that influence…I enjoyed reading it..
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Yes exactly!
Thank you so much for your kind words.
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YOU are welcome
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💓💖💗💖💗💖💗
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😊
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A sort of unrelated question do you listen to music Enigma
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Awesome writing!!!!! I love this!!!!!
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You are so sweet darling!
Much love.
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Good poem!
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Thank you for these humble words.
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Your welcome
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Stunning
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Glad you liked it.
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