Incandescent vapours of sunshine,
Forms on Orphic pattern of hope, miseries.
I walk like a daydream, butter on paper.
Found to the known, lost to the soil..who am I?
Imbricated like orange peels,
Stuck like a star-dust to my mundane house ceilings.
Where, roses and feathers caress my faith,
Only to know, this table and burning body is all just a hoax.
-My Valiant Soul
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my valiant soul
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
Curator of Olive Skins.
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Lovely! You are such an alluring and mesmerizing woman with your words
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This is an instant splash of words on my screen.
Thanks, anyway!
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That’s nice of you.
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Thank you for the wishes.
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Welcome
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Another enthralling piece…yet again your words just wove threads of sheer beauty💕
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Oh wow, you are such a sweetheart.
May I know your name?☺
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Heyy…my name is Khusnuma Ahmed😊 and like always…deeply touched by your words again❤
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Beautiful name you have.
Thank you and I am thrilled to connect with you.
Much love.:)
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🌹🌹
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This is very good. Piece of literary art.
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Yassy, you adore my work to a high level making me go numb about the praise.
😊❤
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😊🙂
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Hope you would resume soon.😊
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Beautiful piece
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Hi, thank you for stopping by and reading my poem.
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Lovely Khusnuma, you are a good writer ❤️
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Sorry, I am not that!
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Yes I realised. That was one of your followers and I corrected.
Sorry
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No worries.
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And thank you for for this post from my favourite blogger
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Thankyou,Kurian!
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I really love everything about this piece. It’s great title as it suggests that perhaps life is a hoax, planned up by some prankster. On a smaller scale, it is true, that the body (a simple vessel to ferry the soul through life) is a hoax and in the end means nothing. We die, the soul parts ways with the body, which is then cast aside. I like how you describe the setting sun, vapours, and the allusion to Orpheus and his journey to the underworld and back. I also really like how you describe the layers of yourself, likening them to overlapping orange peel. This piece really gets me thinking about my own place in this universe. Great writing, Devika!
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Yes, everthing is an illusion or a hoax as you guessed it perfectly. I really like how you get all the metaphors and hidden meaning behingd my verse.
You never fail in understanding the beauty behind the poetry, Alex!
Thank you so much, always a pleasure to be read by you.
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You are most welcome, Devika. I really enjoy your work because it is both inspiring and through provoking.
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And so is yours as only a few of them know the vintage poetry.
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Aw, so sweet of you.
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Excellent…
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Thank you so much!
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You are welcome..
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Hi There,
I nominated you for the Liebster Award!
https://ultimatetravel.blog/2017/09/16/liebster-award/
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It was just mind blowing!!!
The picture too 🙂
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Hi, M!
Thanks for a lovely comment. Hope you are doing well!:)
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I am absolutely good. How have you been?
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All good. Hectic mind, hectic life.☺
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Oh God, same here, I hardly have time, and I miss blogging too 😦
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I understand dear.
Hope you manage your time and I may see some beautiful writings of yours!:)
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beautiful!
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Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome!
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