Tongues of slacking fingers turn
the yellow pages of the book.
Between letters lies space, space of empty bowl
the shadow, the lamp, the oil,
without sunset, the vessel and substance.
Dried petals of last night’s flower
forgot the meadow of my mouth.
The breeze did not speak my name.
lost in the trivial oblivion
Even the sunset refused to caress my soul.
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39 thoughts on “Dissent”
Such a deep sense of abandonment in this piece. Dried petals of last night’s flowers – once blooming flowers wilt as the wind no longer whispers your name. Such heaviness. I felt this so deeply that tears rose to my eyes. Beautiful writing, Devika.
I am really touched by your words.
Yes the work has all the heavy emotion you could feel. It just stays there in the pit.
Thank you for feeling it. Means so much to me.
I know and I do feel it. The emotion is overwhelming. I can not just see the dissent but I can experience it. I am there, too, in that place and am happy to at least share this place with you, at this moment. You are most welcome, my dear friend.
The words carry such depth and a haunting sense of abandonment and despair that it is both beautiful and wishful at the same time. I am sooo moved π
Such a deep sense of abandonment in this piece. Dried petals of last night’s flowers – once blooming flowers wilt as the wind no longer whispers your name. Such heaviness. I felt this so deeply that tears rose to my eyes. Beautiful writing, Devika.
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I am really touched by your words.
Yes the work has all the heavy emotion you could feel. It just stays there in the pit.
Thank you for feeling it. Means so much to me.
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I know and I do feel it. The emotion is overwhelming. I can not just see the dissent but I can experience it. I am there, too, in that place and am happy to at least share this place with you, at this moment. You are most welcome, my dear friend.
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And that sucks!
Hope we clear out the dissent and climb the highest of the tree branches only to see sunshine.
Thank you, Alex.
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Yes, Devika! here’s wishing you and I brighter days ahead. π π You are most welcome!!!
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That’s really sweet of you.βΊ
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Thank you!
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This piece is really heart touching. It’s so beautiful and deep.
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Hey! Hope you doing well.
Thank you for feeling the emotion.
Much love!
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More love your way β€οΈπ·
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amazing…… beautiful……
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I am pleased to know you liked it.
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Poignantly beautiful. Your words have been so sad. I do hope you are okay β€οΈ
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Oh, you noticed! I am fine Dorinda.
Thank you for your concern.βΊ
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Kind of hard to miss it!! I’m glad you are okay…but I’m still worried π
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I understand but yeah I am all in one piece.π
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Wow
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Thanks.
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Beautiful! Love your work οΈ
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Your kindness is so much precious to me.
Thank you!
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Welcome my friend
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Wow, very nice and well written!
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I am always awestruck with your beautiful words.
Thank you so much!
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Your very welcome!!
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Such an impressive piece
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I am truly honoured to have your pious words.
Thank you.:)
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You’re welcome
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My words were not pious in anyway if you look at the definition
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Well, still I am thankful!
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You’re welcome
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The words carry such depth and a haunting sense of abandonment and despair that it is both beautiful and wishful at the same time. I am sooo moved π
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I am glad you found it moving. Hope you are having a good life friend?
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I am doing good, thank you so much!! Always a pleasure to read your postsπ
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It’s my pleasure too to have a lovely reader like you.
Thank you.π
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Beautifully written..
Though it is So sad & lonely..
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Yes, indeed!
Thanks for paying a read. Much appreciated.
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My pleasure. π
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