Often, I am a whole another woman.
A woman who sighs with almond breaths,
oceanic concave shape of my face,
something like an oval,’with fingers typing “slow, breathe”
somewhere in this moist air.
This woman is inside my onion mind,
slithering an oculus bowl of chipped nights.
ah, eh, ah, eh
the voices are hollow,
and the dreams are crippled.
They modify too often, along with my neighbour’s talk.
I hear it like a tunnel.
Often, i am complete,
the stem of a leaking shoot.
The colours of my lovers words suffice the pain.
it happens, during the night,
i am not a sex object.
He makes me full.
Often, i just close my eyes,
these eyelids refuse to sleep,
they rather douse its callous mind in pain,
sobbing and sniffing
mirror plays a friend, too.
embossing my pain, love, all at once.
Your words are like glimpses of a strong woman with extreme willpower. You’re perfect, & so is this poem.
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I feel we all are that strong. But thank you for always blessing me.🙏
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I agree, well said!
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Yes, definitely.
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Wonderful imagery Devika. I “feel” this one.
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Hey, thanks for reading.
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This captures the essence of womanhood so beautifully.
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Hey, thanks.
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Awesome
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🙏
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“The colours of my lovers words suffice the pain..” this line 🖤🖤. Love the poem
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Glad you liked it. Many thanks.
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This is beautiful
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Thanks Luna.
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Beautiful words well complimented by the image.
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You are the sweetest.
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🙂❤🌹
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Very nice poem
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Thank you.
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Wonderful imagery and rhythm of the words. Really enjoyed it.
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Thank you so much for the feedback.
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You have a skill for expressing universal truths so uniquely. Liked this so so much 🤗
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Thank you so much
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Amazing piece of writing describing yourself as a whole other person outside of yourself.
Masterfully done. You never cease to amaze MVS.
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I love to amaze my readers. Thank you.🙏
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Your words are full of power and uphold personality of wonderful person who can face any problem, no matter what the world says.
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I guess you words make sense. Thanks!
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Brilliant
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Hi. Thanks a lot, dear.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford.
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Thank you
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You are very welcome! 🙂
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Wao! So nicely you hv penned it..
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Thank you ❤️
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Reblogged this on Believerdiva.
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Thank you ❤️
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Mastery of words… U r awesome at turning feelings in poetry
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Hi Divya.
Thank you for taking out time to read me.❤️
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a different thought
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Yeah! I love reading u❤
You are always welcome! 😘
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Devika !
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Yessss❤️❤️
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🤗🙋🏻
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Beautiful 👌💟
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❤️
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Such a desirable women – ❤️
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Really? Glad you see that.🙏
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Absolutely- crystal clear 😊
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🙂
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Beautiful ❤
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❤️❤️
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Your words are so powerful and strong..
Very very Awesome..
I like your blog.. 💕💕💕💕
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Thankyou Sadia.
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You’re most welcome.. god bless you. 😊
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