i watch you sleeping in the coldness nights of eve-dropping
with my vapid blue chipped nails, still gasping for breath,
i watch you like a surrealistic, walking above the ocean
to touch the mouths of lost and valleys of lights.
I turn and twitch on the bed of mirrors,
it has parts of your liquid face
gonging, cracking my lips of butter
i still watch you,
from my heavy breasts to my small hands
like a cauldron of wavelengths, skewered apart
still dropping words of a decayed autumn leaf.
this body is lipids and a segment of cosmic lights
deluged in moist concave conversations,
with oneself, with you.
You call me honey, and I begin to melt
like an Orion of mouths and skins of Gods murmuring.
My breaths slip in the ocean, the sky still succumbed
of last night’s naked love
Breaking inside you,
‘unlacing,
mending,
roaring.
i wish your eyes of chocolate rain
closed, loved, closed, mine.
Harbour of jolting smiles,
fever, broken radio voice.
all is here,
in my black pitch room,
in my crisp tongue.
And i watch you breathing, singing.
Beautiful. Not one of your dark writes. A bit dreamy in its tone and flow.
Another excellent poem by MVS.
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Thank you Andrew, rain does that too me. Making me a soft romantic sorta person.
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That is so sweet. You may get angry at what I am about to say, but I kind hope it rains a little more often.
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That makes me smile.🌻
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You poetries are always beyond perfection. Loved it🌸🌸🌼🌼🌼
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🙏🙏
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This is the best of you! If one had to choose a piece that was pure MVS in my mind I would offer this. Thank you D ❤
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And your offering hopefully wins other heart too.
Oh, dear D! You are a blessing.❤️
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Have a lovely night Devika xo
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❤️❤️
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Your poetries are always beyond perfection. Hope you doing well now. Admirer of your work and words you used in poetries🌼🌸🌼🌸🌼🌸
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Thank you Yusuf.
Really it means the world to me even if a bit if my work can touch a soul.
You are so kind, thank you!
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Somehow your work alway touch me and that’s why I’m so found of your writing 🙂🙂
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Truly, I am honored.
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Absolutely gorgeous! This part stood out to me the most:
“this body is lipids and a segment of cosmic lights deluged in moist concave conversations, with oneself, with you. You call me honey, and I begin to melt like an Orion of mouths and skins of Gods murmuring.”
You know how to craft words and put (beat?) them into submission. Much love, K! 😊♥️🌸
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Kelley, you see beauty only because you have it in you. I am grateful to have a beautiful reader like you.
I am all smiles. Thank you.❤️
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You’re too sweet! And I’m giggling because you found my nickname that only my dad calls me! 😁 but trust me, D, it is my pleasure to read yours and if the beauty and love and hurt and experiences we have shared is what makes reading poetry so absolutely divine, then I suppose humanity can keep on keeping on. ❤️
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You once told me your sweet name so I remember it. And girl, your words are wise actually.
Much love 🌸
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Thanks!
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So love the beauty, depth, and portraiture of this work. Well done!
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Thanks!
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My pleasure!
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Beautiful poem
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🙏
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Reblogged this on Cereus Florus and commented:
’cause this is insanely gorgeous and I gotta fuckin’ have it here! Undoubtedly, she’s the best!
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Hey love.
Thank you so much.❤️
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❤😊
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Beautiful poem ! It’s awesome 👍
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🙏🙏
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Aha..such beauty . Romance and love personified.One of your best, devika.
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Intense !
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Thank you
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i love your soft sexual murr’s,
an the icy cold touch of your hands,
all while,
deep in the moistness
of your inner depth
of love….
💞
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Thank you, Chris
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You are most kindedly welcome!
💕💕💕
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Oh my, this is beautiful Devika!!!❤
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Thanks, girl.
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surreal poetry…reading after ages!
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Please read more. Thank you.🙏
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Beautiful surreal romance.
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Thank you so much.
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I really don’t know you that well and wouldn’t want to be presumptuous, but I really feel like your poetry has shifted lately. It’s almost softer or more pensive or what’s the word I want….a more profound longing?
Regardless… This was wonderful.
The last stanza is incredibly relatable and very beautiful.
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It’s actually a repost but yeah sometimes we have that longing desire as well. Thank you for giving a care to read. Means a lot.
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No problem. 😉
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M.V.P.
Hell naw!
M.V.W.
Hell ya!
Most Valuable Writer!👌👌👌👌👌
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That should be M.V.S I guess.but yeah I get you.
Thank you.🙏
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