Resolute flames of candle burn on my windowsill
catching your white still fierce memory laughing in the atmosphere,
Tonight, I rebuke the ashes and the time of Thar
to halt, a clock eating another clock somewhere
If I slit tomatoes with you, you shall give me memories and formations.
For you create footsteps and geometry,
Carrying your dainty artistic eyes in the paintings of my body
I replicate you, I replicate your duties, Mother
And I learn the process of Catharsis from your bellybutton
I sew your words to my hairdo, swaying
singing your touch around,
And I pray and pray
like rainbows touching a slice of paradise.
For, I shall always be You.
P.S – To my everything, my Mother.
©MVS
Beautiful.
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Thank you!
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Very touching and beautiful.
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Means a lot Nitin.
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Beautiful!
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So happy to know that.
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🌹
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You write beautiful. Check my blogs too please. ❤
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Sure.
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This is beautiful!
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Ohh, I can feel the love, the yearning, your whole heart💖💖💖
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Thanks E!
❤️❤️
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You know I’m one of your most devoted acolytes. And while i do love all your work, your heart illuminates like no other when you write about your mother. I’m still rereading your SD guest blog about her, as well.
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This is the loveliest thing I could get from any the fellow writer. And you always humble me with your warm words.
Thank you so much!
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Most welcome 🙂
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Beautiful! Moving!
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Thank you as always.
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Awe inspiring tribute. Epic dedication. Too beautiful! Every line is a treat to read.
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You just said so many wonderful things dear Y!
❤️
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I read and felt this poem as a surrealism of pure genius and heart and soul.
I miss your work. A powerful tribute.
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I am glad you felt this one and I have missed reading your voice too.
Shall be hopping on your words soon.
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Yes. The way you thread and express every line it creates this dynamic emotion of heart bringing peace, and soul balancing the energies of our planet.
You wrote such a promising wisdom of poetry. 🙂
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Wow! Means so much.
Hope things are well on your side Charlie.
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You welcome my friend. 🙂
All is well and happier. Hope things are well on your side too. 🙂
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Beautiful!!
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You do know I love you.❤️
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Beautiful
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Yiee!
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Beautiful!!!!!
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Hey Floral!
Missed you.
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Missed reading your poems too!!!!!
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Aww.
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This piece touched my heart, as my mother is also the apple of my eye. Your words signify how much you admire her, and I’m sure she knows it too!
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Hey R!
I know how you feel and that love is everything.
Thank you for sharing your words.❤️
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Astounding piece.Its verses are just so magnificent and enigmatic.
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Thank you once again.
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❤💛💛💛❤
GREAT💙💜
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Thanks Eliza.
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So beautiful & touching it is & when its about the most beautiful lady of life every word becomes cherishable.
Lovely work done!!📝👌👌
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Yes, that one special lady!
I am happy you enjoyed this.
Many thanks!
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Beautiful!
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Like the way you are.😊
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Ahh, thank you. As are you! 💜
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It was really touching.. Ur relation with ur mom can be felt in each word of yours… God bless your mom… ❤️❤️
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Thank you R!❤️
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This is so heartfelt. The last line took my breath away
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Mothers do that to us.
Thank you lovely.
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Read this again today. Such a brilliant piece. Touched me deeply 💙
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I went and hugged my mother after reading this. Really beautiful ❤️
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Oh wow! What a beautiful sight it must have been.
Love and light.❤️
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What a wonderful tribute about the contribution your mother has given you. This is well written and beautiful. A picture painted with words and a flow that reaches your readers heart.
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I am so touched to hear your beautiful words. I truly understand and value this comment.
Means a bunch!
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This is beyond the words that I possess to do justice to this piece of writing. You are truly gifted.
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You are kind, I know that
❤️❤️
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Beautiful photo. ❤️
Beautiful poem. 💗
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Thank you.
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Beautiful. How we all owe every iota of our existence to our beloved mothers. A beautiful ode, Devika.
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So true!
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