
“There is a field- I will meet you there”- Rumi
I know language of flowers and dandelions,
the language of thorns and crooked stars
silence resist in the topology of melting grass
like the Colossus,
I am lost in trepidation of white penumbra
surrounding my teeth and distance between teeth
All silent.
hush…hush…my body is aerial
hush…hush…my grey segment of the index finger is silent.
In the cacophony of lost and found
I am a soliloquy speech
under your slick peels of love, hate.
I have a temple inside my chin,
unwrinkled,
for I am a pendulum of sonorous
silence.
©My Valiant Soul
Another beautiful poem
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Thank you so much Braeden!
Means a lot.
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Poetry of high standard Rumi.
Your happy follower
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Oh he is an epic.
Truly in love with him.
Thank you for your time to read my work.
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Great Rumi. I love your posts
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Prepossessing 😍
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Aww, your words are extremely precious!
Thank you.☺
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Your poetry is Amazing.
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And so are you.❤
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🌷🌷
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Beautiful poetry.
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🙂
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Well, hats off to your talent. Admirable!
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Areyy!
Speechless I am.:)
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Be well. Goodbye for now. See you.
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Take care!:)
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Beautiful and intriguing as usual!
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Pleased to have your word.
Much thanks!
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My pleasure!
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The opening lines really say it all. The poet knows well the language of joy and happiness and pain and sadness. The poet absorbs all emotions around them. I love the use of figurative language and the image of a temple residing within, unwrinkled. The space may be cryptic and the poetry may be cryptic but you’ve written it so clearly that the poet is a temple. Awesome writing, Devika!
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This surely had figurative speech which you deciphered, of course.
I like how you perceive my work.
Thank you, Alex!
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You are welcome, Devika.
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Totally beautiful
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Very nice poem!
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Thank you.
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Your welcome
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In silence is reflection
and clarity within
the non-judgmental field.
It’s a beautiful piece Devika.
in the shadow
of the wind
time passes
like moonlight
on still water
in silence
until dawn
concealing
how we think
and feel
in the silent still
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That’s the beauty of silence. You see serenity, reflection all at the same time.
Everything is at hault.
Your words are once again outstanding and intriguing, Forrest.
Thank you once again to stumble here.
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Your vocabulary is quite something. I love the wordage and the way you express yourself in a cryptic manner of one bringing in their own interpretation in the matter.
One of my favorite poems by you. 🙂
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And this lovely comment coming from you just gives me utter satisfaction.
I am flattered to learn you loved my cryptic style and the outline.
Thank you so much.
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You welcome my friend.
Using different words always helps the writing process further expand our imagination and emotion.
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Thats the beauty of savouring poetry.
Thank you Charlie!
You are yourself amazing.
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Many blessings to you my friend. You make the world a better place.
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🙏
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“I am a pendulum of sonorous
silence.”
Beautifully said.
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Thank you.
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Beautiful poem and image is just mesmerising!!
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Aww,
Thank you my dear kind friend.
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Welcome 😊
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“There is field beyond knowing and not knowing, I will meet you there!” Complete quote makes more sense, doesn’t it? Rumi is my favorite too!
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