Each summer among the starry-nights,
I see poppy feathers dropping
On my startling skin, music, reverie
Under my chalky lips.
The pattern of floral constellations hang from my fragile skin, diamonds, autumn leaves
All wrapped like a melody string.
The moon flickers on my naked waist,
Churning its secret on my cheekbones
And something trembles inside for I learn today, I am a burning orphic mystery
Lost, found all at once.
Chalky lips
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Hope you liked the imagery.
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Reads well and I am trying to decipher. But I feel let it be, as this one has a mysticism in it.
So even if my understanding is not correct, it’s superior in mystery
‘Lost and found all at once’
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And actually I keep looking at the picture.
Isn’t it a mystery. The light and reflection passing through.
So very lovely ️
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Yes indeed it is.
Thank you once again!
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👍
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Thank you for your amazing insights.
It is mystical somehow even I feel so.
And your understanding is perfectly fine.
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Excellent, I am so happy. Thank you
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Lost and found all at once
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Seems like that line is the show stopper!
Thank you once again.
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No all lines were amazing but there always one such line😊
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So nice of you to say that really! Much appreciated.
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Mention not
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Beautifully written!
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Thanks, Michelle!
Means a lot.
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There are many aspects of individuality, like the light(it’s nature) as inanimate object, but it follows its own destined(attributed) path. It’s Time for discovery one’s discovery. Nice equation of words you have permuted, valiant.
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I love how you perceive this specially your insights.
So nice to hear this from you. Thank you.
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It’s all My pleasure . I read your poetry it’s far better than never ending lectures(some of them) taking forever to end. And it, always, is inspiring. Keep smiling.
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Great post 👍😊
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Much thanks!
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You have rapped the post with your beautiful words and apt picture!!
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You make me smile always!:)
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My pleasure dear
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Lost and found, all at once. that specially caught me.
I really love the way how you express such beautiful thoughts into words, in the form of this wonderful poetry. I could never do this.
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Oh, my dear!
You are really amazing in your style and if you love Pablo Neruda you have the art of poetry in you.:)
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I hardly am able to write any kind of poetry, and even if I do, it is nothing compared to yours.
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That’s you being sweet!❤❤
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There is something beautiful about being able have mystery within us while at the same time knowing much about ourselves. Lovely imagery, MVS.
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And that is how we live and experience mystery, so true!
Thank you Alex, so very kind of you!
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It is! You are most welcome, MVS!
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Beautiful! Not so complex that it loses sense but also with enough creative wording that it keeps its original imagery
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Sometimes simplicity is even nice, right! Thank you Brooke for this beautiful comment.:)
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Very nice poem!
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Thank you once again so much.
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Your welcome
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Words beautifully woven… it really creates a mystical image on my mind’s canvas… it always so enjoyable reading your writings… I get goosebumps each time… beautiful as always❤❤
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Thhank you Kim!
I feel happy to see you enjoying my work so religiously.
I am so honored.:)
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Beautiful
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Thank you dear!
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I’m new to your blog and I love it! Like magic 🔮
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That means so much.
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