The black petals
On my backbone
Fluttering mysteries
Like stupefied
Vintage buildings
Resemble your devouring thoughts,
That cling to
My mouth
My backbone
My forehead
My cheekbones and
My heart
In a insepid mundane pattern
Of a dead leaf.
Published by
my valiant soul
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
Curator of Olive Skins.
View all posts by my valiant soul
Oh, wow, this is intense. Dark in its imagery but so well-written. The comparison of the body to that of a leaf is so vivid and the image you selected to accompany your piece is so apt. Thoughts of another can consume us whole until we dry up to become that dead leaf. I connect with this so well. Great wiring, MVS!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Once again I kept it simple.
Thank you for admiring the image and my dark words yet again.
I am honoured as your comment beautified my poem further.
Much thanks.
LikeLiked by 2 people
You are most welcome. I love the complexities in your simple words and you write dark so well that I cannot help but be drawn to it. Always, my new friend!… Alex 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
That means a lot.
I do enjoy writing dark pieces and Alex is??
LikeLiked by 3 people
Oh I see, then it’s nice to know your name finally./p>
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautifully written with a befitting image.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Once again, so much gratitude!:)
LikeLiked by 2 people
Lovely poem with intense meaning
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much.:)
LikeLiked by 2 people
Dark but so well written! This is beautiful 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hi D!
Thank you so much for dropping by.
Looking forward to read your beautiful Haiku’s!:)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Looking forward to seeing you 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Intense and well done
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your welcome
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love this. The imagery is almost succulent.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you that means a lot.
Love your work equally!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Simply great 👍🏼
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks dear!:)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Of course😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love this❤ simple yet so very deep… beautifully dark ❤❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Much thanks for your kind words.:)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Welcome 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person