This picture you see is a firework,
a shooter of transparent memories.
A vivid piece of artwork, fumbling across my face
with veins growing up in the sky
outwards and inwards
a low key noise/ stammering through the delicacy of time/
Isn’t it strange?
The oval diaphragm painted so calmly.
I see this pink sapphire picture
and I see my eyes there,
holding green, surreal dreams of a colorful palette
A quiet breeze of stars.
I see this starry studded picture now,
vehemently sipping bridge of cold laughter,
This is my evolution now,
trees beaming in a subservience forest.
MVS, I have no idea how you do it, but you just keep reaching other levels of deepness and beauty. This flowed so perfectly.
“a low key noise/stammering through the delicacy of time.”
A beauiful poetic line. Just one of many in this piece.
Sending you rays of sunshine and admiration. Just when I think I have read the best of MVS, she gets even better. Amazing.
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I don’t know, i sit and type some random things whick kind people like you happen to like.
Thank you so much Andrew. I guess these mixed up emotions in me are making me another person altogether.
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I like to think the poet in you is not afraid to explore boundaries or push yourself outside of your comfort zone making for supberb poetry. Great poets can do it successfully. As you have shown us time and time again.
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This is gorgeous, Devika. Your soul/ a sea of beauty and talent.
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Missed reading your feedbacks.:)
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Devika, I usually read all your posts. The predominance of “dreams” married with powerful visual thoughts, and the juxtaposition of images are absolutely stunning. You are a fabulous poetess.
Have a magic afternoon.
G.
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Wow, i feel so connected to your words right now. Thank you for always being there .
And i so appreciate your genuine comments.
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My pleasure, Devika🌸
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So beautiful!
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❤️❤️
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❤️❤️
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A beautiful penned piece of poetry! 🙂
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So nice to hear that.:)
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Wow – I think that is the appropriate response when someone has written something so beautiful you are floored by it. Loved this.
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Aww, aint you the sweetest!
Thank you so much.
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THIS is a vivid piece of artwork 👏
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Thank you dear
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My pleasure
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beautiful piece of work
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❤️❤️
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Mashallah, Devika! By far one of your best pieces thus far, methinks!
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Man! Thank you Kunal. How have you been?
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Not too bad, thanks!
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Ah, be well, brother. Take care
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Strange and beautiful!
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Strange? Haha❤️
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🙂
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An absolutely mesmerizing piece…
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Thank you!
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My sincere pleasure!
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You always blow my mind
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Hi there.
Thank you for this kindness.:)
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WOW! WORDS ❤
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Hey thanks.:)
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A great read-insigtful, valuable and helpful. Thanks for the additional links. Long read but worth it.
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Thank you for taking out some time to read my work.
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Impressive!
Beautifully done.
Your Words and Fotos are always so fantastic!
Greetings from the beautiful Rhine-Highlands / Gemany….
Rosie
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Means a lot.
Thankyou for reading my words.
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This is the dream we all are living for. Sipping in the surreality of the moment around us and turning into beautiful poetry.
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Exquisite words of art!!!
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🙂
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