NaPoWriMO #20
I pray like a verbose lady,
counting the shards of air,
each night
Five fingers, doused in liquids of magenta lipid
a foreskin hanging loose,
I pray like a cloud now.
Full, and thick smoke
i am colourless.
a colourless eye of maple.
I pray thousand times a day,
to be normal.
to swallow these walls.
&
i do it exceptionally well.
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A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
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Even if I weren’t a feeling person, I’d feel this. There’s no doubt that I would. It leaves a bit of an ache. Peace, Devika.
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It does. I enjoy that now. Thanks, Tre.
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You’re very much welcome.
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Luxurious… So very well done.
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Thankyou, Bill
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Always a pleasure.
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It’s really beautiful 😍👏
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Thankyou Pia.❤️
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😊💛
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Did you have relationship issues ? Haunting and sad touch to hopeful word like prayer. You sound mentally disturbed through your words
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Let’s not discuss personal issues. I am glad you liked this one.
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My relationship is just fine.
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Very very good.
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Thankyou so much.❤️
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Amazing poetry – a splendor
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Always a pleasure to hear from you.
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My absolute pleasure
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“I pray like a cloud now.” Oh. Wow.
I felt vulnerable after reading this piece. It’s expertly penned. You’re a fantastic poet, my friend. Thank you for sharing this piece!
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Thank you, I wrote this in a minute I guess.🙂
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I don’t know what this poem explains..
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Yeah because you believe in “erotic chats” so better find someone else!!!!!
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A prayer as naked as the cloud and so surreal are your words.
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