NaPoWriMo-8
There is this pond at the back of my backyard,
filled with kerosene and knots of pale moonlight.
I drink summer drops from the systematic cold windpipes.
There is a blurb.
Short. Precise. Like a mother’s gentle touch.
A glistening path of nothingness. Absolute silence.
Here, my body sits and watches the dance of the gods.
Dance of gods up in the sky, monsoon in winters.
I rest, I rest like an eternity on the vertex of this pause.
An excellent piece of writing. Bravo.
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Thank you 🙏
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Love the prose/poetic style!
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Yes! Thanks for the read.
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Good writing!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful – so many deviant thoughts
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Thank you Shantanu. I don’t know what I was thinking though.
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It came out beautiful 🌸😊
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thanks!
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Most welcome 🤗
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Beautifully penned 👏 💯
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Thankyou Nirant.
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My absolute pleasure !!
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Wow your writing has seriously improved since the first time I’ve read your blog posts. Props! I’m impressed 🙂
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beautifully articulated!
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Thank you sweetheart.
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The ending three lines are sheer perfection. This is a bold one, Devika.
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Bold I don’t know but yeah you do make me bold. Thanks love.❤️
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💙 You’re very much welcome.
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I am too naive to comment on this piece. It’s beyond anything beautiful I have ever experienced💙
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No, I guess you are way too smart girl.❤️
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It felt ‘Peaceful’ by the end.
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Amazing!!
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Thankyou lovely, how have you been?🙂
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You are welcome. I am well and also wanting a lot of space to myself, thank you 🙂
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Surely, we all need that.
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You have flowed with the poem…letting your hair down with the words.
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Thank you Megha.❤️
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