Yesterday was the hardest if i must say
with amniotic sheets of lost air dripping my bare chest
and extraction of arms,
making my mouth dry, loss of homes could be seen.
Missing phone booth’s of lavender drops of deads,
and hunters, hunters, hunters,
yes, you have visited the I.C.U of my mouth
with palpitating halogens, demarcating a cleft of my chin-my knee
the knuckles bleed, towards the Polaris of numb soil,
if that’s a place, so, i am flowing.
i am flowing, doped and surreal
in hands of hours
clocks mocking my body, the six-inch pits of pits.
i sit and hum a vintage song here,
a dainty varicose nerve revolving now,
i am being operated in the midnight,
among the lamps, the shades, the silhouette
i am being deluged in occurrences half meadow,
my home is the plain stench of the sun.
it sits somewhere inside my hair, city of maps.
it’s late and i am under-observation still.
your writing style is always so captivating
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Thank you K.
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Haunting imagery, yet a gorgeous read.! Wish no one had to go through all this. š
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Huh. I wish that too.
Much love to you.šø
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So blunt and so beautiful… What a piece!
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Blunt? Eh! That bad?
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Not even a speck bad!… Damn! It is gorgeous…! But the expressions are raw and naked which is absolutely eye catching!
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lol
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Devika, this is otherworldly…
“i am being operated in the midnight,
among the lamps, the shades, the silhouette
i am being deluged in occurrences half meadow,
my home is the plain stench of the sun.
it sits somewhere inside my hair, city of maps.
itās late and i am under-observation still.”
Truly.
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Oh dear Tre.
Thank you for this mind boggling word of yours. You make me happy knowing the bond we cherish.
Cheers!
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You’re very welcome, lady. It’s my pleasure.
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Stunning
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Thank you.
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Youāre welcome
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I have an element of concern and concern it is
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felt like a roller coaster.
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This is extremely painful work I feel. I should have put up a disclaimer I guess.
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This is so beautifully penned. š
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Thankyou.
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You’re welcome. š
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You must be an intense person. For sure your writing is
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I am.
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Stunning. Painful. This pierces the heart in a way that is irreversible and that’s why you’re my most favourite here! I am in awe!
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OMG ššæššæššæ
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Very sensitive and eloquent !š
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Thank you so much.
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This poem speaks of an out of body experience by a poet..being witness to her own pain.
Very surreal.
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You have a writing style so unique to you. If you showed me ten nameless poems and only one was yours,. I bet I could pick out yours. Your writing is so unique. It is so MVS.
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Oh, I love this comment like so much. I am grateful to have a brilliant reader and a writer like you saying this!
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Smiling. It is so true, I read so many people, but your style is so your own. Stay inspired.
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My thoughts exactly!šš
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Hey MVS! I’ve nominated you for the liebster award!
https://wp.me/p9YmoF-3R
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I love this, Keep piercing that veil!
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Thank you š
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