My Phospherent body of raisin skin
moans and swells like a process of Spirituality
with fingers clinging your mouth,
your scars, your lips, your teeth
and your heart of surrealistic reverie.
I become a thunderbolt,
in the opulent windows of dreams and smiles
wearing your white shirt, I swing.
I swing like an autumn leaf,
cascading down your throat,
that black spot on your chest
You thump and palpitate my arms.
Spring is born between our naked lips.
The temperature of cold walls crack
in the slices of Orion blue.
A stardust drinks the entire Constellation
Life trembles and illusions occur.
I breathe you somewhere between
the spaces of my index finger and my thumb now.
I wear your sins on my mercury tongue
levitating branches and seeds of satisfaction, darling.
©MVS
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my valiant soul
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
Curator of Olive Skins.
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Wo-ah, wow, what a write!
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Ah, and wo-ah!
What a striking comment Kunal.
Thank you for that big wow, really.
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Loved this!
And the picture, perfectly picked! 💙
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Hey Orange,
Thank you so much for paying a read .
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Always a pleasure to read your stuff 🙂
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😊❤️
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Beautiful piece of art and apt image
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Thanks a bunch lovely.
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Lovely
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Thanks.
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Very well written.
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“Spring is born between our naked lips” took my breath away as did the “I wear your sins on my mercury tongue”.
I am in awe of your poetic prowess!
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And to hear words from my dear friend gives me immense pleasure which I am sure you must know by now.
Thank you Nandita for focussing on my word plays.😊
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Lots of love flying your way ❤ ❤ ❤
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Right? “Spring is born between our naked lips” is a great line!
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“I wear your sins on my mercury tongue…’ Damn! Brilliant!!
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Means so much.
Thank you Walt.
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My pleasure! ☺
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This took me by awe.
You are such a poetess an enchantress ❤️❤️❤️❤️
I didn’t say you poetry for no reason 😍😍😍😍😍😍
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It seems like that’s a new tag I am being referred to and it feels lovely to hear such flattering words by all my amazing writer friends like you!
So thank you Priya for all your love.❤️
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All the love ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Always lovely.😊❤️
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Looks like you’ve moved to the next level valiant !
Keep writing.
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Next level, oh my!
I missed your such encouraging words Ben. Thank you.
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“I wear your sins on my mercury tongue” wow! I love love love this poem
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I am all smiles.
Many thanks for such a warm comment.
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Incredible. Imagery is just fantastic
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It’s always lovely to hear such words from you as I see you as the most bold writer present out here.
So much respect!
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Oh my gooodness. I had no idea you thought of my poetry that way! Wow. Thankyou so much. What a wonderful compliment. But I think of your poetry that way too, because it is raw, and honest, and very descriptive and you always use words so cleverly. Thankyou for your great poetry x
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Dear Lorraine, I am truly in awe with your words and verses. They are so lucid and flowy, one can easily feel the emotion behind it. So yes, you are amazing.
And you are always welcome girl.❤️
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What a bold and arousing poem! I like the typewriter font you chose for it ☺
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Thank you so much.
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It’s a pleasure 😇
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This is so beautiful Devika ❤ You words are magical. 🙂 Awestruck.!
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So happy to hear your words Sameera.
Sending tons of love.
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A spring is born every time you write 🙂
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Oh my! What a beautiful thing to read.
Thank you.:)
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Very well done, as usual, my friend! I believe my favorite lines have to be “The temperature of cold walls crack/ in the slices of Orion blue.” You’re a gifted poet, who I always look forward to reading!! ❤ Kelsey
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That line is my fav too perhaps and I am so thankful to you for always reading my work.
You are really a great writer and I appreciate your such warm words Kelsey.
Thanks for the love .❤️
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You’re very welcome!! 😊
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Very well written
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Thank you always!
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Your quite welcome
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I see you’ve been reading the surrealism link I sent you.
These lines blow me away:
“A stardust drinks the entire Constellation
Life trembles and illusions occur.”
Your work is always in search of a higher element that you connect us as your readers and come out the other side as feeling safe and inspired. 🙂
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Actually I don’t read any of it.
Seems like I am creating something of my own here. My very own genre, which might be surreal and dark.
You words always encourage me more Charlie.
Thank you so much dear writer!
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Surreal and dark are the most promising writes anyone can create and express in that direction. 🙂
You are awesome! 🙂
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The way you do it is always your own special way, and it is always amazing.
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This one took me on a rollercoater ride with my emotions. Brilliant.
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Thank you Megha.
I am really delighted to know that you felt such strong emotions. Really appreciate your words.
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My pleasure Devika.
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Okay, this is amazing!
“I become a thunderbolt,
in the opulent windows of dreams and smiles
wearing your white shirt, I swing.
I swing like an autumn leaf,
cascading down your throat,
that black spot on your chest
You thump and palpitate my arms.”
I love this! It flows exceptionally well and is so very well-written right up to the end.
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Oh my!
You are one of my old dear writer friends whose work I really appreciate and adore so coming this from a gorgeous writer like you makes my day.
Thank you Tre. So much love!
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You are so very welcome and thank you!
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Amazing masterpiece of a poetry, another one!
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Many thanks to your enchanting words, always!
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You are most welcome!
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Lines have sprung from your poetry like spring, new growth and life, and incredible imagery! Loved this. 🙂
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So humbled to read this.😊
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Beautiful writing!
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Thank you so much.
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❤
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Any reader who doesn’t feel an electric charge resonating from your words… is probably dead already. Epic piece … when you do this I’m on my knees. ♥️♥️
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Get up Diana. Please don’t humble me this much.
Oh, god I love you so much.❤️
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Haha you are a firestorm of emotion. Love you back big time for your ink dipped fingers and quivering heart! ❤️
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I’m commenting again because I fainted and lost my memory and re-read it and it was even better. This is a masterpiece of passion!
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And this is the best compliment I have got I guess. Please don’t faint on me dear girl.
You are special.😊
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You are sweet, intelligent and talented. And this is just the tip of your creative iceberg ❤️
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Many many thanks to a beautiful person like you.❤️
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Have a wonderful day. And please don’t write one like this again for a while … I need recovery 🌹🌹
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Every single phrase of it has touched my heart! And I hate that whenever I love a writing so much I forget what words I should use to describe how I felt! But it was beyond beautiful!
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Aww.
So heart melting is your comment Tapasi.
I am really in awe of your writings and wish you a very warm day!
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This is like a rejuvenation of the whole universe. It’s a stupendous verse. It’s too good to be true , Devika. You are an amazing and prolific writer. Honestly , no one like you. This blew me. Can’t stop raving about this.
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Yassy! You are humbling me.
And honestly this motivates me so much.
Always a treat to hear such words from you.😊
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You are a blessing here. I am honored to be reading such fantastic work.
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My rejuvenation as I read this amazing work. Seriously , you are fabulous. How do you do it , my dear.
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Reading you is like travelling to another world,. How well you breathe life into your words, dear.
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I am always breathing poetry!
Thankyou so much.
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Yes, you are, dear and it’s always beautiful! You’re welcome.
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Absolutely a insurmountable piece of poetry, Amazing 🤓🏅
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Means a bunch.
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glad you value the opinion 😎
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Absolutely Great to read
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Spring hs certainly sprung
in my surrealistic constellation
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That’s so lovely.
Thank you for dropping by.
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BEAUTIFUL. A lot of…literariness here, but it’s beautiful!
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This is phenomenally stunning
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Thank you love.
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Wow
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🙏
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You leave behind a benign surreal occult. Spellbound is the only word I can think of
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Such a high praise this is. Thank you S!
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You are welcome ❤️
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Finally, I have been waiting for this and it’s a masterpiece
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Thank you again.
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All the things I’ve ever done and ever want to do both to and with the one I love. Magnificent. It could not have been written or said better.
Tim
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Excellent and inspiring 👏👏👍
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measured and simmering..
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❤️
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Reblogged this on A Global Divergent Literary Collective and commented:
Devika Mathur
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So often your writing leaves me slightly breathless, like nervous anticipation before sex. This one in particular, I reread three times, just to savour the words.
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Damn! You just made my day like legit.
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Welcome 🙂
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I love the way you do it, every single time. You are a brilliant write.
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You know, it means a lot.
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As do your words.
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My goodness! What a beautiful use of metaphors and smilies. Truly spring is born in the opulent windows of dreams and smiles. Letting the stardust drink the constellation. And wear the sins on the mercury tongue. Beautiful 👌👌
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I am all smiles reading your beautiful comment.🙏🙏
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Such an amazing use of metaphors and smilies. Truly spring is born from the opulent windows of dreams and smiles. Just beautiful
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Hey thank you so much.
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“I wear your sins on my mercury tongue.”
Maybe my favourite line of yours thus far xxx
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Mine too.
Thank you
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♥️🌹 beautiful share♥️
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Thankyou
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Welcome
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Superb…
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Thank you. Glad you read it.
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You’re sincerely welcome. I am too- thanks!
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