lights on this orange body,
this wood is a proof
my mouth is a squid,
hanging to catch your wet breath.
a fainting memory eats me.
for i am a sucker of bones & heart.
this is a spot of us, darling,
the summery grass of love-making.
i bite my scorched lips,
i bite my tongue to feel your departure,
and i feel hollow as a black spot.
a trajectory of million dreams.
stilness often wraps my swollen body,
and flicks my elongated neck,
until i eat your face, simple & molten.
i am that vase, half- lived.
half floating and it sucks to be like that.
So many great lines here MVS. Your finale was powerful and very real.
Bravo
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At least, someone reads me.
Thank you.🙏🙏
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That is hard for me to believe. You deserve to be read by the all of wordpress.
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Ah, gone are the days. But anyway thank you sincerely.
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It actually remind me of a poem you wrote a couple of months ago about being forgotten. Wish I could remember the name . It had amazing metaphors, but your poems always do.
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You have awesome poetry, I hope this isn’t your last one my friend and many read your work. Stay with it.
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It’s not my last and I know you too read me. How sweet of you.
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No problem at all, I really enjoy your work
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This is old fashioned sexy. Outstanding poem D🖤
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you always write very vividly and your descriptive word selections add depth…though this is a sad piece of poetry…
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I am so touched to hear your words.
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I was hoping you would be, you are such a dynamic woman… there is a duality about you through your writing, but you feel the need to protect the sweeter, softer side. yet I see beyond the darkness, because you yourself are the light at the end of the tunnel… peace and best of wishes, my dear poetess
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Jeez! Words like these always give me goosebumps. Well, I know the light is in me, I try to work upon it too. You gave a good reminder though, thanks!
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your most welcome and please smile
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Smile. Well. 🙂
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I am in love with your poetry.💕
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The string of Romance is powerful then the rope
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True
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What a power packed writing
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Thank you.
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My pleasure
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Great writing , valiant, but one teensy tiny little thing….I’ve never seen you as a squid 😁
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It’s a metaphor
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Wow. This is just so pure & vivid.
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Thanks love❤️
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oh i’m sorry. seems like, at night, your eyes seems to color itself, just so they could twinkle, as and when you smile. hoping you’re well and having a lovely day and is not stressed. 🙂
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M not offended. It’s just that I am too busy.
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Wow! Loved the flow of poem! Beautifully written 🌿
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