I am a forgotten memory
with a quiet mouth of a clock( a chain that clogs my neck)
a forgotten yellow tainted page, blank as an ocean.
These people i see, i smile at my own hands,
my own chin, my deep purple intense eye(i know it has an intense shape of a flower)
softly listening all songs
swallowing the delusional veins and freckles of my hands,
i know i am a memory.
forgotten like vintage telephones, crooked voices
90’s soft love collecting silver dust from mouth to mouth,
movement of the breeze, a song of nostalgia.
Sepia. Broken pencils. Vintage poetry.
forgotten like that.
,©Image an Words MVS
It’s magical, what you do with words, Devika. I love the following lines:
“i know i am a memory.
forgotten like vintage telephones, crooked voices
90’s soft love collecting silver dust from mouth to mouth,
movement of the breeze, a song of nostalgia.
Sepia. Broken pencils. Vintage poetry.
forgotten like that.”
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These lines resonates a lot to like everyone I feel. And it’s the truth.
Thank you sweetheart.❤️
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You’re most welcome. 😊
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Every line conjures up a image, that can go on its own thread
Every line trying to remember a forgotten memory..you?
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Yes me. A memory now
Thank you for reading, means a lot seriously.
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Reading you is always a pleasure and sort of an adventure..a nice memory you will make, but it’s just too soon 🙂
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🙏
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Brilliant.
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Read too fast. Thanks though.🙏
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You do not mince your words and that’s what I like about your writing too. I always read your work. Fast or otherwise 😊
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Haha. I know. I am really grateful to you as u understand the depth behind my words.
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Your poetry is too good to be missed. Sometimes I bookmark 😊🌸❤️
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Damn now 🙏
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😊🌸
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I can relate to this lovely wordcraft, beautifully written!📝👌😇
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🙏🙏
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This poem had a melancholy almost dreamy mood. Somber and very different from your usual write. Broken pencils, nostalgic songs, and vintage phones may all be forgotten. Only a damn fool would forget this heart felt poetry or a muse like you.
MVS, like a beautiful sunset; you never disappoint.
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Your words do humble me a lot. Thank you so much Andrew.
Means a lot to me.
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Magically blogged,keep blogging dear🌷💕
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Thank you!
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Pleasure is all mine🌷♥️
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MVS that is Beautiful. 🙂❤⚘
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❤️❤️
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Amazing
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Thank you Meera.
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Never. Nobody can park you just in memory and forget. You are always top in mind MVS
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Aww
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You are always the one 🌻
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tainted page, blank as an ocean… Your words speak so much in such calmness… Love your writings so much
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Thank you so much.
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This is great! I love it – so many great lines in this one
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Thank you B. Hope you are well.
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I am thanks – hope you are well Devika!
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Yes still surviving.
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I’m glad!
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I love the way you expressed it, every line speaks so much.
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Sigh! Glad you enjoyed it.
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🙂
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This was beautiful!
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Very profound and meaningful imagery!
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🙏🙏
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Awesome !! ‘am still buried in your imagination !!
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I am in love with these words.
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Love you.
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Wow 🙂 I really loved this, So Beautifully expressed
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❤️❤️
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Beautiful!
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Brilliant!
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❤️❤️
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Your words are too beautiful and carry that deep pain, which can not be forgotten soon I guess. Your verses are that sepia stain in my aberrant thoughts. Time scrubs it gently but here you are, stuck to me like a reminder of the pain.
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So beautifully said
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Thanks it got me so inspired I wrote a poem following that thought. Once I post will let you know.
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Will be waiting.
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Thanks Devika
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Reblogged this on A Global Divergent Literary Collective and commented:
Devika Mathur/My Valiant Soul
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poetry by a talented writer. Please read and enjoy.
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Amazing poetry my friend.
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Thank you
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You are welcome. I loved your work.
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I know I am a forgotten memory, forgotten like vintage telephone. So good to read your poems. These are fresh and radiant like a morning dew.
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I am happy you felt so. Thank you.🌸
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Very powerful.
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Yiee thanks.
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thanks for sharing such a beautiful information. keep sharing about it.
poetry is a form of literature that uses aesthetic and rhythmic qualities of language—such as phonaesthetics, sound symbolism, and metre—to evoke meanings in addition to, or in place of, the prosaic ostensible meaning
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Moeen, thank you so much. Your views are appreciated. I am truly blessed.
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Wishing u An abundance of goodness in life, Richness of soul, peace in the Mind, Happiness in ur heart, joy & laughter on ur face & may it all reflect in the sparkle of ur eyes.
May my Lord Krishna removes all obstacles & showers u wd bounties, benign, blessings. May happiness & peace surround wd ur eternal love & strength.
Wishing you a very happy janmashtmi. Always stay safe, happy and secure 😊☺
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So nice. Same to you.
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I wanted to tell you something
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Yes?
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I’m afraid of you
Nothing just delete comments
Good night
Early morning college
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I have an early morning job as well.
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You are doing job wow
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Since past two years
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My dear Goddess allow me to touch your feet and bless me
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So in all your poetries I am the goddess?
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Good night
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You too
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So I am that love?
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Omg! You still stuck to that? Anyway bye
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Hey listen up. Don’t ever end up your precious life for a girl. Never!!
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Look I m saying gently to you please don’t love me.
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What the fuck.. please enjoy your life. With other girls. Good luck.
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Why what did I do?
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Go
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