restlessness spits the wall of death
in hunger & pain.
my body rotates like a disc
surrendered sound of music.
tip toed stigma, a struggle each day
insects sound screeches,
this wooden brain,
or an empty space of lovemaking.
call it anything.
say it names, zig-zag platonic voids
plastic belly button games.
sick voice of head.
call it anything.
a flower holds the world,
its a silhouette speaking of a grave.
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©Mvs
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my valiant soul
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
Curator of Olive Skins.
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You have a rather unique featured image this time. And yes nice poetry.
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Ah, you noticed.
Thank you.☘️
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It was easy.
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Love this! Did you pick the image specifically or was it just because? Either way, I like it! 😁🌸❤️
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Let’s keep that a secret.
And thank you for reading me always.🌸🌸
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🤐🤐🤐
You got it lol!! 🤗😄 and trust me, it’s always a pleasure reading you, dear!
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🌸❤️❤️❤️
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‘plastic belly button games’
WOW! Only you can come up with such beautiful unthinkable metaphors.How do you do it, I wonder at times. This one is simply amazing, D!
Love! 🤗😘❤️
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It’s the saddness dearie. I am glad you don’t do this. Because your style is just yours. Beautiful.🌸❤️
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No, D. It’s your creativity, the beautiful power of imagery you possess, the wonderful talent that the God has blessed you with. Sadness may accentuate certain emotions, but it shouldn’t take away all the credit just for that. Coz I know you would always be an amazing poet, whether you’re sad or not. 🤗😘❤️
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See, that’s your kindness as o say. And thank you so very much for all this support and love. It matters the most.❤️
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You don’t need to thank me a bit. You deserve all of it. ❤️🤗❤️
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Perhaps sadness brings such gorgeous poetry.🌼 I adore your writings.
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Well, I guess so.
Thank you dear S. You are a sweetheart.❤️
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❤️❤️❤️🌼
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Beautiful as expected MVS. But I struggle with ‘poem is broken’. I don’t know if it’s my sad state right now, but I would look for happiness in you.
But a flower holds the world 🌸
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Brilliant
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You, my dear, can never be a broken poem..even you are shattered in million pieces will have a beauty of its own. So let you bleeding mind and restless body go beserk on paper and create a masterpiece. Love and hugs, dear.
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Megha, I am thrilled to receive your words for your own writing is amazing.
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Thanks Devika.
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Love the line “plastic belly button games”
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Thank you.
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Always beautifully poignant, dear friend. But, sadness does not define you. You define you. You are too beautiful to be unhappy…
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Hey, it has been ages sincei heard from you. Thank you for this.❤️
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Life….it gets in the way 😦 You’re welcome. Take care of you ❤
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The woman,the myth,the legend has returned :). But that image is broke though , I love it Dii.
Praise to you 🙂
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Aww, ain’t you the best
Thank you.🌸
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Yes I am . LOL
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Hey! I’ve nominated you for The Liebstar Award. I had to nominate three bloggers and I couldn’t help but nominate you! Check it out –
Have a good day!
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I am honored. Thank you for this sweet gesture.
But I am afraid as I dont do awards. Hope you understand.:)
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Oh, alright! No problem!✌
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the words are hauntingly beautiful !! i just loved this !!
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Thank you so very much.
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you’re welcome !!
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brilliant
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Thank you.
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Nice one!
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Many thanks!
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Your welcome
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Such a beautiful poem👌.
The ending lines itself depicts emotions so well. How you come up with such amazing metaphors.
Seems icing on the cake👌😍
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Thank you my dear friend.
❤️❤️
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Welcome 💕
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Really like the rhythm of this poem. Love the line “ insect sound screeches this wooden brain”. I can hear them buzzing
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so nice of you to say such kind words. Thank you!
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From the opening line (so amazingly written) to the very end, it was all beautiful and amazing. Love your writing!
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Hey Floral!
How have you been? I hope everything is rocking at your end girl.
And thank you for your sweet words. Missed it!🌸🌸
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Missed reading your writing too! Just started my summer break so I’ll have more time to read your work!!!!!
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Oh great. I wish you a fun and a creative break love.❤️
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And yes. There it is. The flow, the beauty and the pain that I love. Perfect
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Thank you so much. It means a lot.
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I love it 😍
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❤️❤️
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Some body has got a unique way of expressing things. Pretty interesting.
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Thank you.
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Nice poem. Wish i could write as good as you
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Hey i am a new blogger if you have time please visit my blog read my poems and give suggestion.
My website link is here http://freeworldofimagination.WordPress.com
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nice! 🙂
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Thanks!
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Please like this and tell me where or how I need to improve bc I’ve been new here😭
https://hoityaura.wordpress.com/2018/07/03/vessel-of-apologies/
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Interesting choice of words!
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Someone has some lit talent…
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powerful stuff :O)
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brilliantttt poemmmm……..really lykd it…i too write poems…at powerofwords97764921.wordpress.com….i hope u l read nd give ur feedback..it will be grt hlp
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plastic belly button games just rolls off the tongue!
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Awesome poem!
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Oh! This is some virulent void reflected upon and perchance taken care of – I like the visual tapestry of your words. Read your most recent verse too.
It’s the act of writing which fuels this restlessness or restlessness that paves the way for the act and it shall hopefully go on, for it makes us see beyond the spillage of words and draw poems, albeit broken ones, out of them. Also hoping that it is not at the expense of self.
-HA
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Thank you Anmol for such deep insights. I admire your words and am grateful for your time and words spent.
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its a silhouette speaking of a grave…
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I love this, it gets me thinking, this poem is deep x
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girl.. i love it
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Thank you.🌸
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