I have a craving tonight
for a slice of sun
or moon- talks, in runs.
to decipher the poultices
hidden beneath and above,
somewhere between your lips
& paradise,i have a craving
for your love
as soft as petals of Petunia
a craving to count you
& your terminals,
your folds of skin.
i have a craving to
melt into you,
with skins kissing.
a craving to burn pan cakes
and smudge the edges against us
like a paper ball dancing,
silhouettes swaying,
to put my mouth on your tongue,
to suck your scars
& to incubate it with my
infinite love.
©MVS
end of #NaPoWriMo.
Great post. Power packed. Happy you time to you.
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☺️❤️
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If this isn’t the epitome of “craving”, I don’t know what is. Brilliantly done. Enjoy your break.
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You are the best, Tre.
So many thanks to you.❤️
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You’re most welcome, lady. 💙
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Tre you are a wonderful writer too
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Hello. Thank you. I appreciate that. Peace to you.
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Thanks.
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Beautiful poem and apt classic images suiting your poems!! I really love them
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Thank you Tanvir.
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I like your valiant
poetic style.
I’ll be incubating
on this for a while.
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David, I am pleased to hear your words.
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Very sensual poem 👏👏
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Happy that you liked it.
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I really like this
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Thank you
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Incubate with infinite love – brilliant! Beautiful poetry filled with wonderful figurative language.
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Effortless. 👍
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Thank you Ankan.
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Enjoy your break. ☺️
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This is really beautiful ❤
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Aww❤️
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Wow!!! Love your sweet and seductive words ♥️
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Oh you sweet woman.❤️
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♥️♥️♥️
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😘😘
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Your cravings sound delicious. So well expressed MVS
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Always appreciate your fine words.
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Just so stunningly beautiful!
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Thanks you Pragal.
I hope you are all good.❤️
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You are most welcome. Absolutely well 🙂
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Aha..love your cravings for metaphor and the love they bring to these eyes.
Love these lines”I have a craving to
melt into you,
with skins kissing.”. Brilliantly written my sweet poetess.Take your break and come back with pearls.
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Thank you Megha. It’s such a nice feeling to see your love overdose 😉
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Ah. It kills!👍🏼
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Hey thank you.
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It is a delicious craving and a scintillating thought. 💛
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Thank you!
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My pleasure
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Incubate with infinite love – brilliant! Beautiful poetry filled with wonderful figurative language.
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Your words make my day, really!
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Love your writing! You are always welcome!
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Sensuality has reached a feverish peak. Lovely poem. It reminds me of Neruda’s sonnet.
I crave your mouth, your voice, your hair.
Silent and starving, I prowl through the streets.
Bread does not nourish me, dawn disrupts me, all day
I hunt for the liquid measure of your steps.
I hunger for your sleek laugh,
your hands the color of a savage harvest,
hunger for the pale stones of your fingernails,
I want to eat your skin like a whole almond.
I want to eat the sunbeam flaring in your lovely body,
the sovereign nose of your arrogant face,
I want to eat the fleeting shade of your lashes,
and I pace around hungry, sniffing the twilight,
hunting for you, for your hot heart,
like a puma in the barrens of Quitratue.
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Oh, I know this.
Neruda stays in my heart and mind each time I am doing poetry.
So kind of you to read my work and to digest it with such fluency. Thank you so much. It really matters a lot.
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The best craving I have seen for the night. Absolutely thrilling and passionate. Can I put it this way. Makes one climb the heaven 😊
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I cannot express enough of my gratitude towards your kind words.
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Your writing and it’s beauty is making me say a little of what I actually feel and admire. I will be a true and ardent follower
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Amazing post
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Thank you.🙏
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Gorgeous
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Good words and Image.
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Ooo Devika this is as delicious as chocolate cake!
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Thank you love.
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Excellent poem 👌👍 I’am flabbergasted !!
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🙏🙏
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Beautiful
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Thank you.
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love your opening lines that just draw me into a feeling of pure bliss, you are very talented
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To melt into you. Just wow! Nicely penned
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I absolutely love your writing! It really captures the feeling of the poem. I’ve noticed that your pictures are old fashioned and altogether, it’s so perfect:) Keep writing, this is great! I would love if sometime you stopped by my blog and checked out some of my work as well!
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Hey, thank you so much.
I appreciate your kind words.
Would soon be reading you.🌸
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Always! Thank you so much!
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Lovely
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Reblogged this on jomillyArt.
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You are an incredible poet!!!
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Beautiful and yet full of passion.. a craving to
melt into you,
with skins kissing.
Loved the line
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Sorry for the late replies. But thanks a lot.🙏
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no need to say sorry, you dont have to reply to everything I write 🙂 was just going over your old posts
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Oh please, my readers are everything.🙏
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ok in that case, reader accepts the apology 😛
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