Let me say this precisely.
I entered in your walls of quietness to flutter, like vapours and fumes
with hushed heartbeats —baked body,
Titanium slipped its coffin like a bell tower
inside my teeth and foot
empty and broken whispers
I entered in the temples, with doughnuts swinging
charcoal breaths coagulating my sanity
insane, insane she is insane
Cracks and mosaic
filters these walls, like a moth biting a moth
and insanity blooms, for the time, is spring
incessant murderous time( If I have time, I will perform disectomy)
Incongruous, incompatible.
I stick to a shadow of curtain,
absorbing its peachy warmth, rotating and curling my lips, my hips
and I rub my palms to enter once again
in your swollen canopy of sanity
©MVS
Sounds like you are going through something very upsetting dearest…
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But I am happy to read your warm words.
❤️
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Be strong dearest! 🌹🌹🌹
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Such talent. Wonderful poetry
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It’s completely sane to be insane sometimes. Stunning as always, D! I love this. ❤️💙💖💜
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Right? Buy it often makes you weak and that is like sick to me!
Anyway, now I am better especially after your words Chhaya!❤️
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Very nice poem
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Means a bunch.
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Cannot find any words to express how it feels to me. Outstanding piece of writing.
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I understand how it might have felt. I hope you are okay!
Thank you Matthew.
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The only way to move forward, not holding on and release (as you do so well)… Beauty in those hurting words that also let others know they are not alone.
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Means such to hear these words from you.
Thank you.
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Amazing – it’s as if you handed me a cup of acid and I drank every word. ❤
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Jeez! I don’t want to be that brutal and harsh sweet Diana.
But I understand your metaphor here. Thank you for that.❤️
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It wasn’t real acid…. maybe citric. Ok, maybe a delicious lemon slice dessert.
It just burned me in a beautiful way… 😊🌸
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Ah..I really love how you put it”it burned you”..nice.❤️
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You’re so talented! I hope everything’s okay and that whatever is going on gets better! Love you!!!
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Oh girl, things are fine.
You are a darling to always read my poems.
Bless you!
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Beautiful like the purple eyes of Elizabeth Taylor! 😊
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Yes, thank you rishu.
So nice to hear your words always.
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Welcome!
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Wo-ah! Wow!
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Glad for this!
Thank you.
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My God your words are beautiful
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Aww.
Love and hugs ❤️
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Outstanding & amazing on words with pen as always👌📝
Wishing lots of smiles & happiness ahead😇☺
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Love your writing!!
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You flatter me always!
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Sometimes your words give me a scare, an eerie feeling.Sanity is very subjective in today’s world.Cheers! to my insane poetess.
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Okay, calling me insane now feels eerie too! Or maybe I am a weird Poetess.
Thank you love.❤️
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You are a weird poetess but in a very artistic sense of the way.
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I got it Megha and I loved it. Thank you.
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Like a moth biting a moth!!! The angst , the pain is ostensible. Your style of writing is so so different… This abstract talent is just wowww!!💕💕
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I am extremely touched, Parth.
Thank you.
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My pleasure!😊
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Relatable level of insanity. It’s beautiful,when it’s twisted,right ?
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It’s mind boggling.
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This is so deep. I feel the pain in your prose. The sincerity to give it a try again was beautiful. 🌸
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I couldn’t understand your last line?
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My bad – I typed too fast 😊 I was applauding you for the sincerity you showed in your writing.
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Thanks!
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My pleasure
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Awesome 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Thank you for your words.❤️❤️
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Deep. Melancholic. There’s pain. And I can’t even begin to imagine how deeply its affect you.
I hope you are doing much better now.
Take care. 🙂
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It’s an old post so yes I am better now.
Thank you for your sweet words.
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It’s showing in my feed now as posted a few hours ago.
But then the comments are from Feb.
And anyhow, I’m glad to know that you’re doing better.
Take care. 😊
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If only I could play with words like you do!
“with hushed heartbeats —baked body,
Titanium slipped its coffin like a bell tower”
Beautiful work, my friend.
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Elle, I already love what you write.❤️
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This poem pains me a vivid image of an eerie feeling of a demon like entity entering some soul and shaking and rattling to its core, numbing its senses and taking control of it.
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Hi. I’ve nominated you for the Quotes Challenge. Do find more about it on my latest post.
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Such pain. Such beauty. Use your pen as the crater to spill out the volcano of thoughts. Paper is patient. Paper will understand, and everything will be all right.
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I am delighted to see you know my words so well.
Thank you.
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Pleasure.
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This might have melancholy in it but it’s absolutely an amazing oeuvre, just like My Valiant Soul. I love this. Being away from WordPress for somedays and now coming back to your blog did make me realise how I missed your posts.
💕💕💕
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Sweet charisma, your words are like petrichor to me.
Thank you girl.❤️
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Aahhh the petrichor!!!! Pluviophile?
And it’s my pleasure.☺☺☺☺
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Both go hand in hand, always.❤️
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True true. 💕💕💕💕
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Wonderful
it reminds me of this old movie i watched about the insane asylum patients getting free run of the town after a bomb scare during the war.
it’s bonkers and fantastic if you ever get a chance to watch it.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/King_of_Hearts_(1966_film)
great poem
it’s filled to the brim with imagery
cookey cracks and style.
well penned Valiant.
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