How- My- body- Loves- You

Hold me like soft sand and poetry shimmering inside our luminous body. With neutrons clinging. Alphabets dancing. Hold me in the ebb of your turbid arch of bones that wraps my skin against your beard. I see my sagging breasts colliding your face, erupting cocktails and exotic dreams. I hear crickets churning my stomach. I, ingest my fears and swallow my dewy rainbows where you circle my lips with moist conversations of love.I place my frizzy coconutty hair on your chest and you knit a dreamland back and forth.I swallow your caricature and drink it like a cupid or something even more divine. Sinking beneath your foot I douse my fingers with painted doses of smile and hopes. A forehead of sunsets and mosaic, I chew my crisp quixotic air till I am floating like wax. This is how I worship your transparent shoulders, your utopian breath, little murmurs. Loops and magnets of lipids and liquid dreams. A grasshopper marks my mouth with your rosewater incensed air. Here, a collision occurs. Occult.

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A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times. Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied. My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others. Curator of Olive Skins.

65 thoughts on “How- My- body- Loves- You”

  11. Devikamathur.The seductive queen.It’s another gorgeous poem.The way you started the poem sent me chills,because the way men hold a women like doll or like soft sand…it’s Soo impressive and sensuous at the same time.There is lot of hidden meaning in that line..maybe as a woman you like it..actually Every women likes it..it’s kind of inner respect and care given to a women from men..the way they hold the women says it all..that’s why I loved the start veryyyyyy much😍😍😍. And coming to your talent of putting words in such beautiful way that too without any vulgarity with lot of ecstasy”Hold me in the ebb of your turbid arch of bones that wraps my skin against your beard. I see my sagging breasts colliding your face, erupting cocktails and exotic dreams” loved it a lot..I can even imagine that..soo nice…and then you never stopped the pace of romance indeed increased with these lines “, ingest my fears and swallow my dewy rainbows where you circle my lips with moist conversations of love.I place my frizzy coconutty hair on your chest and you knit a dreamland back and forth” dreamland back and forth ..woww…I can see the female brain during the romantic times through your words..they are like mirror.
    “my crisp quixotic air till I am floating like wax”again oxymoron..chewing the air..loved it again as usual..there is another beautiful line “Loops and magnets of lipids and liquid dreams”discussing lipids and liquid..it’s Soo good…like chemical composition of emotions..loved this comparison..and last one word a perfect finish…OCCULT..I don’t know the meaning..Soo searched and found that nothing is more perfect than ending romantic poem or feel like this💘👌👌👏👏👏👏👏

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    1. At times I am speechless to reply you back Kalyan. Your dedicated read always makes me happy and satisfied. How well you have focused on each line and each word. I remember there was a time when my words perplexed your thoughts unlike now and so I am more than glad to see my this prose could do that talking to you .
      You truly loved it as it’s clearly visible and I again have so much respect that you took out your time to Cherish lines and inhale it’s meaning.
      Thank you so much. You are a great writer friend.

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      1. Oh my god..why are you Soo touched..I did like this to you many times before..there are also times I am not that Impressed with you or not liked that much..it’s not possible to reach their own standards everytime..at that times I don’t comment or I just like it..but when I like it..I pour my emotions..because I want to express that love towards your lines..actually I don’t write this much to any other writers here..at times I think myself that why I am writing this much to her..Am I trying to impress her or to get attention?? But it’s just I am connected to your poems more than any others..all are good and different in writing all..but you are my personal favorite..i learn from your writings and I love to read them always..and you acknowledge them always..I like that from you too..and you read and understand what I felt from your lines..so I am writing all this..just because you have to feel what I am feeling..if you said just THANKS FOR READING..then it means you are not giving that importance or something like that..but you always understand and value me..that’s the quality I love about you..anyway..always waiting for your lines🙏🙏🙏

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      2. I value my readers and especially my honest readers and that definitely includes you.
        I am touched because I can make out if a person is being honest or not and you always decode my verses beautifully!

        So thank you for all your kind reads and paying a deep connection to it.
        I shall always be humbled. Just that.

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      5. yes, like you and few other friends still follow me and I am pleased hopefully I will get all them back..still have 300+ poems to publish….exported from other blogs

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  15. Such a brilliant exposition of lovemaking. I couldn’t stop smiling right from the very first sentence “Hold me like soft sand and poetry shimmering inside our luminous body.” till the last syllable.
    P.S : I’m binge reading your posts.haha

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  16. You make love sound so exotic while not losing its basic traits of helplessness, adoration, longing..it comes out as magic everytime you write a non-dark piece

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