In the memory of your conundrum body, I carve my outline
onto your colossal caricature,
The dreamy eyes, my paradise of lust
I see my thighs dipping in your skin,
biting the tiniest part,
tearing the flesh to discover the hidden mirth
Swaying my dark hair on your sturdy wet neck,
I take the holy waters into my parched mouth,
Insatiable breaths, defining my yearnings.
As the galaxy smiles, the stardust tremors.
My skin expands into the colour of our burning flames.
The throbbing of heartbeats,
instils the dandelions with thunder
With the evolution of us, I discover
a shadow of smiling moon in me, for I see her lining
hidden into my belly-button.
And , the spring is born.
Β©My Valiant Soul
You are really good.
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Yeah..was missing someone!
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I know someone.
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Hmmm.. I bet you do.
And so as soon as my body couldnt take it, I had to atleast write about it.
Thankyou though for reading it.
Unexpected.
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All I can say is wow! (Iβm blushing) it was like I was thereβ¦holy moly! Lol πΈ
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Thankyou once again for reading.
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Your work is flabbergasting…. I hope u check out my posts too
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Thankyou and sure I would do.
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So zippy ππ
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Thankyou.
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Sensuous π
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The way you are playing with the words… Majestic! βΊ
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That means so much to me.
Much thanks!
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Marvellous is the word for you. Enchanting for your words. Amazing is the picture. You are a sorceress of words Devikaβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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So many ways you have described me.
You are that’s why a darling to me.
ππ
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And you are to me β€οΈ
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I am so lost in this pure ocean of all consuming love that I am starting to feel nostalgic about some deep set, cast aside memories…you, my dear lady, deserve all the happiness in this world and beyond…I am in some kind of a hypnotic trance β€β€β€β€
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This is one of the best comment I habe read today I must say for the sole reason you wishing me happiness after reading this piece.
I must say you are marvellous soul, no doubt.
Thank you for your immense love.
Hugs!πβ€
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πππ
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Wow, can feel the energy from that one.
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Yes I tried to carve down my emotions.
Thanks for the read.
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No problem at all
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Whoaaa!!!! Took some deep breaths there π I will stay affected by your poem for a while …
I will say just this – stay blessed, you are truly gifted with magic of words.
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I got your beautiful message, so don’t worry.
Thanks for the warm wishes.π
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π So much my pleasure.
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Such a sensual poetic feel and a connection to oneness of the universe
and what the cosmos offers us in return. Beautifully well captured in imagery and magnificent in your craft.
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You know exactly what to see if I am writing and you always hit the nail perfectly.
Thank you for this genuine remark.
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You’re welcome, friend.
I put myself visually in your mind to get a feel and grasp of your incredible work. You always have my attention. π
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Erotic and dark ππ§
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Dark? May I know where did it seem dark?
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Pure passion at its best.
In your galaxy here’s
to you and your love…
she is the night
the stars in her eyes
and smile light up the sky
until he can see
the outline of her body
like a constellation
that moves
that guides him
from anywhere
in the world
until he can reach her
until he can hold her
stars connect
the constellation
of their souls
for all time
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I am amazed with your precise formation of words as always.
Your writings have been truly close to me as they speak so much truth.
Thank you for blessing me yet again with your amazing lines and making my work spark even more.
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Your LINES are the blessing Devika.
Thank you for sharing with all of us…
a piece of your soul. π
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Honoured!π
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I love your writing! How long have you been writing poems?
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Thanks!
More than a year on WP and since I remember in my journal.
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The hidden mirthβ¦subtle even in overtly sensuous imagery. And I thought dark was your forte.
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Dark, romance, truth these are my forte.
Thankyou so much!!
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Well, that doesnβt leave us with much, we will keep reading : )
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You might say that.
Thank you so much for reading my work.
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Eroticπ§πokay no dark.
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Beautiful
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Devikadi.. Can u tell me the name of yr book… The one u wrote and it was published…
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Sure.
The Travesty of Soul.
You can check it out on my home page where I have provided the links.
π
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Hehe..thank u….m ordering it in Amazonππππππ
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ππ
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The last four lines…just aah! Amazing as always!
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Much thanks.π
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Each line reveals the threads of your title. You’ve captured the moment perfectly while staying true to your dedicated use of lustful images of biting and revelations within the belly button. This is intensely sensual as can only be described by someone experiencing the yearnings. Great poetic description, Devika.
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Thank you so much for reading my work always with deep insights as thy always cherishes me up.
Have a great day.
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You are most welcome. Thanks, have a great evening.
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Jaw dropping… imbricated play with words is nothing more than WOW
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You are kind enough to say that.
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π…you killed it with words..and with breath taking imagination..wowed a lot..you are master in this genre..
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Wow!
Thank you for such an amazing comment.
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Thanks for such an amazing does of seductive poetry…
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Will continue to do that.
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Everyone knows that..you never fail
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So kind.
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πππππ
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Sensual. Erotic. Great imagery. Beautifully penned by a fine poet. β€
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Such amazing adjectives.
Thanks!π
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You’re welcome. π
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