I match the hollows of my empty watered eyes
with the upcoming
flowers,
The dandelion dreams
shall not die
instead will
have coruscating thorns
in the symphony of a sweet puddle
to become the powerful lantern
of all times.
I match the hollows of my empty watered eyes
with the upcoming
flowers,
The dandelion dreams
shall not die
instead will
have coruscating thorns
in the symphony of a sweet puddle
to become the powerful lantern
of all times.
Flowers are like the beauty and light to the world.
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True indeed!
Flowers and dreams are pretty similar. They boom with right nurturing.
Thank you for stopping by!
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You’re Welcome.
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Stunning imagery. Planted seeds, nourished with water which flushes out the impurities and feeds the soul (like tears wash away the sadness or flush the eyes with joy), will blossom if nurtured. The extended metaphor is beautiful. I love the optimism and hope in this piece, MVS. This is pure poetry!
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Thank you for this beautiful comment.I was tired of some darkness in my poetry and the dark genre, thought of being positive this time.
Glad you found it stunning.
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Even the darkness craves light sometimes. You are most welcome, MVS!
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What an amazing thought you said, I should remember that.
Thank you for sharing that.
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You are most welcome, MVS.
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Inspiring and a strong post!
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Thank you M!:)
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Nice poetry, nice writing.
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Thank you, Kurian.
I am glad you dropped by to read my work.
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I reread it a number of times and each time I read, I loved it more than before….the featured photo is phenomenon. It’s beautiful💗
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I am flattered, truly!
Thank you for stopping by and loving the picture as well as my work.
Much love:)
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Exquisite and beautiful poetry!
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Aww, thank you so much love.
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You are very welcome.
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What a light and beauty in your writing!
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Oh, thank you so much.
Did positive write up after all!:)
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This is so full of hope, D ! Do I already see the “much needed break” show its results ? Just kidding ! I truly loved this piece. It’s beautiful !
Much love !!
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Hi Chhaya!
I don’t know now what happened to my”break” as I begin to feel If I am not writing what the hell I am doing.
Well I don’t know still when to actually take a break.
Anyway, thanks for your immense love once again.:)
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Haha…this shows that no matter where you go, but writing is where your heart would always remain. Well, good for your readers that you didn’t stop writing. We would have missed you so much. 😊
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Well said! I can’t simply live I guess without my fingers clicking keypad and how could I allow you to miss me?
You are extremely a sweetheart.
❤
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Aww…and so are you my dear ! Missed reading your posts past two days. Will check them out soon. Hope you’re well.
Much love !
💓💓💓
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This is pure passion and gorgeous too. Beautifully done.
“symphony of a sweet puddle
to become the powerful lantern
of all times.” Simply beautiful.
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And inspiring too right?
Thank you so much my friend.
Lots of love.:)
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Ha! Yes, ma’am. That too. You’re most welcome.
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❤
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Positive and Inspiring!
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Hi swalia!
Thank you for paying a read.:)
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Your words sweet like candy. You are a amazing Poet.
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I am thrilled to learn that from you.
Means a lot.
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I enjoyed your work. I added you to my favorites.
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I am all smiles and fascinated!
Thank you so much.
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“The dandelion dreams / shall not die” That sounds so soft, so precious, so melodious, when uttered out loud. I enjoyed reading this piece so very much!
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Oh, so much thanks to you for paying a read!
Dandelion dreans are indeed soft.:)
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I love to read just about as much as I love to write! It is pleasure discovering your world through your words. ❤
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It’s my pleasure to stumble across your blog as its truly amazing.
Much love.:)
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Your kind words warms my heart ❤ Much love back ❤
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Aw.. ❤
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❤
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Awesome content…i truely appreciate💕
Check out my blogs. These are all about the cost effective fashion and beauty tips. Hope you like it 😊
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Sure!
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