Excess- a poem

Napowrimo#2
Not just this:
there is excess of daydream floating around,
a toothless, opaque body of light
what do we name it?
A house full of sighs/ gasps/ swollen people
where objects assume outlines

But who are you? To raise a question?
The minute I saw you, I could not escape.
On the sea floor, a sea- bell tolling
A multi- coloured house without a boundary.
All i see is you leaking from sideways.
You, numb/ like the trees that stop growing.
Everything in you is blue and in excess
Blue lakes& lagoons
Blue islands in the blue lake.
You
Gathering/ grinding/ mixing
everything in excess but love.
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A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times. Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied. My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others. Curator of Olive Skins.

7 thoughts on “Excess- a poem”

  2. well I must say that poem was quite beautiful. Coming from a family of poets and artists I can appreciate your obvious pain. But you know love and life is wonderous, it seeks us out. My blog, at the moment, is not my poetry but if you are kind enough to read it, you may find something to laugh or chuckle about. Go well, I am sure we will “talk” again as I shall be looking for more poems from you. Sue (bloggerbarnes)

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