we slumber through days
of moist observations
of things unspoken of.
An organ. A transparency..
there are things beyond our two nutty eye
to cling a mouth full of love,
Raindrops
that cascade through my fragile shoulders
through my heavy white bosom
that
speaks of you
speaks of sin
speaks of white emptiness
raindrops sweet and soft
unravels a story of mother’s womb.
so much beyond and so much less.
What do I ask for now?
peace or lust from you?
A landscape. A delusion.
I write this to pleat my unevenness
to fool you into believing
about our eloping mad love.
Hi, Hope you all are doing well. Let me know how did you enjoy my this poem in the comments below.
Beautiful. This is so beautiful and raw. I love it.
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Thank you Lucy. You are too kind:)
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Read your poem after long, Loved this👌👌👌
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Thank you so much for reading.
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Nice one!
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Thanks!
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Wonderful!!
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Thank you.
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love mysteriously dignified –
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You understand it well.
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And you write beautiful 🌸
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It’s beautiful..
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Thank you.
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I have always liked your poems 👍🏻☺️
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How kind.:)
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💝
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Really loved reading this one, truly beautiful! ✨
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Thanks love
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Sleekly sensual, I enjoyed this
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🙏
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Devika, this is divine!
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Thank you.
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My pleasure 🙂
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Very nice!
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This is fantastic.
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Thank you.
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I loved the poem seriously!
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🙏🙏
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Wow. Missed reading your poems. Loved it. Absolutely Beautiful.
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Hey!
Missed reading your work too. I am glad you liked it thanks.
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I especially like these opening lines,
“we slumber through days
of moist observations
of things unspoken of.”
Keep shining your light.
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So kind.:)
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Wonderful lines these are!!
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Ah…I just loved this piece Devika ♥️
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Fantastic piece of art … l am a 13 year old n recently created a blog … this is d first blog am following…. am loving it lots
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Hi, you are of my students age. It’s nice you chose to give wings to writing.
Stay blessed dear.
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U teach ??
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Yes dear.
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Thnx a lot
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Reading this is such a pure bliss. 💛❤💛
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Thank you Shreya.
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Well penned down❤
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Thank you.
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cascading through the moist shoulders..speaks of you, sin and the white emptiness.This is so you..This is Devika.
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It’s wonderful ✨
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Very good.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you Kritika.
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Pleasure 🙂
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Fantastic
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raindrops sweet and soft
unravels a story of mother’s womb.
so much beyond and so much less…like this..so beautiful and pure..song
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Thank you for such kindness:)
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Thank you Pragya!
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