Slow as a neighbour’s plant
vindictive, timid.
Slow as a ripple static
hush.
An oblong wax melting away,
slow,
slow as raindrop stuck on a tree
As a splash of colour unable to blend
a monologue twirling inside my stomach
a song so old
with cough drops all around the drawers
dying
slow
dying
repetitive
insipid
Once a melody
now only an arm
now only a forehead
nothing at all
A nightmare in blue
It knows nothing now
only a flat desperation of air
The feet knows the crevices of life.
Look carefully..
there!
A small dot and a fanned breath of a leaf.
Slow.
I felt those words. I felt them from my heart, into my heart. ♥️
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Oh. ❤❤❤
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Slow i am.:)
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Best first poem line i’ve read in awhile.. shared..
https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/06/12/slow-my-valiant-soul/
thanks for your generosity. 🙂
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Thank you so much!!
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blown away again
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Thank you.
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My pleasure
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I know I’m bad about commenting as I work full time but I so appreciate your writing and your mind. I want you to know how much your friendship and support has meant to me and how highly I hold you. I’m here via email for ALL work pertaining to your book OR anything you need.
You are a wonderful human being and I adore you. I count you as a real friend.
I may be off social media for some time or forever but I’m not gone
Thank you for being you and please know I will always be reading.
xo
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Nice!
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Silky slow. Stunning poetic soul💮
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Grateful.
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This is so refreshing to read, your writing style. This poem in particular is very raw and I love how you structure it as well. What a beauty of a piece with engrossing description and detail. It is amazing, haunting and heartfelt. Beautiful writing as always.
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Hi Lucy!
I am thrilled to know that my poem was felt so beautifully to you. Thank you for reading.:)
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Wonderful poem 👍 lingering slow ‘am devastated !! 🤝
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Thank you so much.
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Dark yet beautiful. Can feel that eerie silence. Amazing!
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Hey!
Thank you for your words.
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Beautifully composed 🙏
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Thank you so much.
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Lovely
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🙏
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Slow it is the secret to feeling .
Slow is the way to breathing.
Slow is a path to living.
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❤️❤️
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Beauty!
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Thank you, sincerely.
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Welcome always!
keep up great work !
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slow as the beauty of the unfurling monologue in my stomach…an evanescence of life slowly vaporizing and losing its color. Sadness and its myriad forms. Deftly penned.
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Wow. As if you slowed the time with words.
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