A gloomy promise
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my valiant soul
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times. Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied. My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others. Curator of Olive Skins. View all posts by my valiant soul
beautiful
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Thank you, Mike
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it is deserved. thank you for the words.
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Beautifully sweet and poignant and filled amazing images.
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Is it really sweet?
Thanks though.:)
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In my humble opinion thereโs a sad sweetness in some of your lines. No offense intended.
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Ooh..i like that.
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Missed your writing like hell! This is signature you and I love it the most, MVS โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Oh man..aint you the sweetest.๐ท
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You’re the best ๐คโค๏ธ๐ธ๐๐๐น
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I second that๐ธ
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An epitome of all the worldly emotions. โค๏ธ
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Oh my๐บ
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The imagery in this poem fills my heart with surrealism and that is the healthy vitamins I need. ๐
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Beautiful
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You are hands down the best poet in the genre of surreal poetry. What imagist lines.
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