Let's roll our tobacco tongues together,
a song so pure, the poetry of cosmos.
I have a word stuck on my eyelid
to love
to walk on the lines of your mind.
A world created of seismic waves.
And this bedsheet witnessing our lovemaking,
I have a love song
hidden under my blouse,
intricate as my palms,
detailed full womb of springs.
A song,
parallel of being
A single light.
And we suck this night
out of the paper straw,
this mulberry night of waves and potions.
We suck the air
making the atmosphere thin and fragile.
This galaxy is now
plucked from the hands of our infinite words.
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my valiant soul
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
Curator of Olive Skins.
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Beautiful!
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Thanks!❤️❤️
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These lines here are amazing:
“I have a love song
hidden under my blouse,
intricate as my palms,
detailed full womb of springs.”
Simply amazing, Devika!
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My dear Beautiful friend.
Thank you for being there for me.
🙂
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You’re quite welcome.
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Amazing
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Beautiful
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Beautiful words my dear friend. A love that consumes the world around them.
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Glad you liked it.
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I will love to experience such extreme emotions – how will that be – a splendor
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Thankyou.:)
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My pleasure
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your beautiful words an epitome of passion and pure delight. Fills my heart with joy to read your words D
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Thank you Megha! I am always thankful for you and your delightful words.
Cheers.
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Don’t thank me . Your presence in this community is an absolute blessing for people like me ,who have unending thirst for poetry.
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Such a beautiful love poem… reminds me of some of Neruda’s. The kind that makes people swoon. Absolutely lovely!!
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Hello I’m projectillogic as of today I have 39 songs at http://www.soundcloud.com/projectillogic I used to be on reverb Nation but they stopped letting me upload new songs at reverb and at reverb these are the song reviews I had in my press kit
“This is more my thing. It’s very upbeat and the guy rapping raps as good as snoop dogg who is the king of rapping. He has a very good voice for rapping and the backtrack is very good as well. Good rhyming in this rap as well. I really like this and hope I get more of this music.
“With regards those 2 comments you mentioned, I speak from the point of view of an engineer and from listening experience. For the first, there are many similarities between your music and music which has become successful and/or well known (as well as many differences), so with the appropriate nurturing and treatment, it could become successful”
-Jabun
“The song beat was great I loved the lyrics. The rap was just great I loved it I hope other people like this song to. The instrumental was great. The artist did a great job good work for him.The raps of the song was perfect I liked the rap it made since I liked this song. The rapper I think did a great job and I hope he can get big and get to be one of the greatest rappers of all time. I want this rapper to be known for his singing and I want people to know him.”
“I really like this! The chorus I like a lot too. I love the lyrics. It’s deep and truthful. I like the diffent voices, it sounds like more than on person. The auto tune sounding voice is amazing with the song. The song is not too fast, or too slow, but just right. The lyrics are very understandable, and this song is just great. I would say a hit if it were to be on the radio. :)”
“I love the lyrics nice beat, Nice tune I love the singers voice the song is a very good piece of music. Im a moder saint like a child palying games you always walk off! I love teh lyrics and teh beat. Im lost in the lyrics they are loved. Th estrain to never be afriad, no no no I can do what ever tonight no no no. This is a total a 10 so good I love this one! The fingers of fury I killed the bery love feel me I dont scare me no no no no fight me no ground!”
“The 15 years rapping experience definitely shows, that’s definitely not something you can fake.”
I’ve also written developed books and books of writing feel free to explore my site because of the Jesus statue incident and others says I might be a prophet
I’m Jerome Allen hickman Jah is the rasta god
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Honored!:)
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