your body.
it spreads under my own body.
duplex spiral grapevine.
/
Cherries under your foot,
A lament to recite,
day and night.
count and tell me the times I sank for you,
in you,
above you.
/
My voices tore away like a sunburn.
love blooms love with such endearment
A landscape of Oval sunset all in your palms.
this sky lives like poetry in your belly.
Where i come and sleep, to absorb the moisture of cold nights.
I bloom, like a lotus, near a windowsill to worship you,
darling,
i see you like vintage telephones in my surreal mind.
Rings of vacant loneliness has eaten me, desiccated me.
so i bury myself in your atmosphere of springs and springs.
Sequences are memories. An atom dissolves.
Orange/rusty/moist
And I dissolve in you.
You’ve always had wonderful imagery. 👍
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Hey, thank you to read it so fast.🙏
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You’re one of my favorite writers and I have you on my notifications. I hope you dont mind. You just popped right up. 😁
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Favorite? Damn! Actually, now I am grateful.
Thank you so much.🙏🙏
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My goodness, such beauty is spilled out of your fingers… Truly beautiful piece! 💗
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And omg, I honestly did not expect such sweet feedbacks.
So, thanks to you for reading.
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The pleasure is all on this end. You’re so welcome! 😊
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So sweet.🙏
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So so beautiful!!! I love this… you’re amazing ❤️💓
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Thank you, Anupriya.
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I love the flow to this piece… makes it feel as if it’s alive. I am particularly fond of this line: “this sky lives like poetry in your belly.” 😍Truly magnificent from you, D!
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Once again, I am so flattered to read your delightful words.😊
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Awesome
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Very nice
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Thank you!
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Your welcome
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Damn good.
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Hey yassy.
❤️❤️
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Hey hey 💖
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Loved it ❤
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Thank you dear
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Easily one of the best love poems I read these days.
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one Of the Best? Oh my
🙏🙏
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Really, it was so good!
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❤️
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Wow.! Evoked a calm emotion in my heart!💙
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❤️
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Absolutely love this! Gorgeous!
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Thank you.
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A pleasure!
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I’m such a fan, MVS. Everytime I read your work I’m transported, and am in awe. You make me swear – and in the best way. So glad you exist. ❤
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You are such a beautiful soul.❤️
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I’m dissolving into your words. You are the master of imagery 💋
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Thank you beautiful.
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Wao… Just a beautiful chain of expressions…. The flow is so well composed… Liked it
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Thank you.
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Oh its lovely dearest each and every line ❤
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Thank you, Soiba.
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Wow! This is breath taking.
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Thank you.❤️
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My pleasure! ❤
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Beautiful beyond my words!
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Thank you.
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You are more than welcome!
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This is ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥…the imagery of body under body,sinking in you many times,eating the moisture,rings of loneliness disappeared,worshipping you like lotus .comparing sky with poetry ….fidaaaaaaaaa
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Thank you, Kalyan. My genuine reader.
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the end ❤️ – what a beautiful poem
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“this sky lives like poetry in your belly.
Where i come and sleep, to absorb the moisture of cold nights.” That
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Yes, thank you 🌼
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The expressions and the beautiful imagery. Surrealism was one of the most beautiful art I came across when I attended one of writing workshops. Pleasured to read your words. 🙂
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Hey thank you so much for this. Really appreciate to hear from you.
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Thank you brother. I so adore you actually reading my words with that interest.
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I would always be an admirer of your *vocabulary* (pun intended) 😂
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But truly, you know… It’s all my pleasure. 😊
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This is beautiful..how the love dissolves in poetry and poetry dissolves in us. The circumference of desire.
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Thank you for reading all my last poems.❤️
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There are ways to dissolve
like dust in afternoon sunlight
like dew in morning sunshine
or a breath breaking into pieces
in the middle of the night
If you ask me for one more,
way to dissolve
this poem silently stirs
the soul like a cube of sugar
in the hot tea cup
called this universe
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I love the sensuality of the poem.
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🙏🙏
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