your slurpy mouth holds magic
to sediment a stoic seed
of silence, like silence.
calm shades governing,
a tip-toed saliva of blank eyes,
a life kissing a life.
behind your earlobe,
the sky falls,
in tunes of carbon
thick slices of carbon.
coal romances with fire,
life exists everwhere.
©MVS
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my valiant soul
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
Curator of Olive Skins.
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Beautifully written. I love the way you manipulate language to turn it into such unique poetry. Brilliant – always!
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And I love your kind compliments..
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You are always welcome!
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I so adore your inspiring words.
Thanks a lot!
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It’s my pleasure! I really love your writing. Not just the flow but the complex nature of your use of language. You describe things differently and that makes you unique. It’s the kind of writing I really love!
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Yes, that’s basically the surrealistic poetry that I do. Thank you for showering such immense love for my work.
It means a lot!
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Yes, it is. The pleasure is surely mine!
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soulful – the correlation you draw always leaves me spellbound
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You are a nice soul.
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Thank you for saying that 🌸
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Always.🌸
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Coal romances with fire. Wow, that’s passion in ultimate MVS
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“your slurpy mouth holds magic
to sediment a stoic seed
of silence, like silence.”….devika..💘💘💘 you killed it..how can you write such a brilliant lines..the first lines explaining about how one sediment the pain itself is marvellous..and in the in the end of that you wrote LIKE SILENCE..I am awestruck really..I am not even exaggerating devika mathur…what a brilliance .this is one of the best line so far I have read from your posts..💝💝💝…” tip-toed saliva of blank eyes,
a life kissing a life” this is one off the beautiful imagery Again…tip- toed saliva of blank..I just want to know how you go into those depths sands form those imaginations..and life kissing life..is again good line..and next paragraphs..you wrote how sexy falls behind ear lobe in forms of carbon..why have you used carbon..I am actually thinking deep..but I could get it..but I really love the way the way you linked it to carbon..but I have to understand in depth…anyways..unlike your long poems…which anyway attract me like honeybee to flowers..this being very short have really made me spellbound..
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Highly romantic 🤝
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So nice of you to think so.
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Life exists in your words.❤️
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Oh wow.
Thank you
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awesome work done ✅
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Thanks ❤️
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great 👍🏻
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Aww.
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Awesome!
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Thank you so much.
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