The protrusion of sultry roads
chokes my unborn laughter.
my teeth dropping off the tiniest molecule of red wires
sharp, electric, bizarre.
I doubt your tongue, human!
For chills are deceptive often.
Summons of thunder on my pale lips
now your sturdy words,
collide, oh human!
Your tricks are electric.
Your tricks are deceptive.
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
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Sometimes we have to bit our tongues and other times we have to call it like it is. I felt the intensity in this piece and agree, deception inhabits a few of our counterparts, more so in this digital age. Well-written!
The truth!!!
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And you know it.😊
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💜💜
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Bitter truth..well explained like thorn necklace,like a decorating weapon..humans are attractive and yet deceptive
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You have given sunshine to my words!
Thanks for your honest views. Much appreciated always.
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Haha..sunshine..I have never hidden the sun
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chokes my unborn laughter – besides the entire poem, these words, I lingered on them for long. Such deep feeling of suppression …
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I am amazed how each time our choices coincide!
Always a pleasure to hear your words.😊
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🙂 Those 4 words just still me into a feeling that seems so familiar…you are brilliant in this decscription.
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😊
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Electric indeed. Reads well
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Thankyou.
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You are very welcome 🌹
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Electric by name and style love it.
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Kind of you to say that!
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I love this poem, especially the last two lines!
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Floral, love you!😊
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what a play with words.brilliant
shreyans
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Thankyou so much.
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pleasure
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Another wonderful piece! I love the imagery, always so creative!
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Thankyou so much for paying a read!
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Love it!
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Glad you enjoyed!
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Cruel deception!! We humans create our own masterpieces…we are the original legends of this sly old form of art!!!
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Your lines seem poetic itself.
Lovely to read your opinions always.😊
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❤
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Sometimes we have to bit our tongues and other times we have to call it like it is. I felt the intensity in this piece and agree, deception inhabits a few of our counterparts, more so in this digital age. Well-written!
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Wow, your words are powerful really!
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So dark and visceral. Wonderful and chilling. Loved it. 🙂
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Honoured to know that!
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My Valiant Soul
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