Pick up the long brush and dip it into the red colour, colour then stroke my body with the same, dip it again in that heavy paint, colour my waist till the moonlit drops and the new morning knocks the door.Take me in you, again and again, hold me hard so that my heartbeat stops, let me feel my oblivion as I breathe hard, now arrest me in your thoughts.The dimensions do not conclude at this level as I am still awake so take me back again there, make me free, make me wild.
The caress of you hands on my back is the strong fire that ignites my future wisdom, so show me your colour depth! Don’t stop thumping my mind, don’t stop making me wild.Hold your brush more tightly, colour my body all over again touching the lows, touching the peaks, then join the dots, make a statement.
This zone where I have been suffocated me since then, the brim of my love extinguished and disappeared like dark smoke, so discover the new delights all over my body, as we luxuriate together.Take me to the wildest worlds, where our desires can collide, the fire could spark and the nights can be bright. Show me your colour, the deep passionate one and fill me with it till I break.
Wonderful!
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You are too kind.:)
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thoughts
become a
tapestry of words
when well spoken
or dabbed
in staccato strokes
like the oil brush
of an artist
on canvas
crave the gentle
caress of words
like the intimate
touch of woman
You write your best when you write “passion” Devika…
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Wow!!
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This in one of my favorite pieces.
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Thanks!
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Beautiful.
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Much love.:)
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Very creative with words…..beautiful ❤
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That felt lovely
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Thank you.
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I’m lost for words. Honestly a beautiful piece ❤👌
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Thankyou Flora!
I am happy to know you enjoyed it.I have read your work and its enthralling as well.
Nice to meet you!:)
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you’re too kind 🙂
nice to meet you as well
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Hugs to you.:)
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Beautiful picture! Vibrant colors!
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Thankyou for the comment and all the likes. I just wonder how fast were you to read my work? All the likes came dropping like a bomb which was a little strange.
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Hahaha! Sometimes it all appears at the same time for some reason. Keep up the good work! Thanks for sharing!
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I will. Thanks for paying a read, if you did.lol
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So deep it is !
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Thank you!
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I’m am speechless. You take my breath away. Breathing has always been overrated.
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Your comment is extremely kind.
Thank you Jayren!
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🙂 I loved this!! Beauty of words that pulls me in a different world!
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Wow this is so sensual and sexy, didn’t expect that from you.
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Amazing piece, the fluidity is astounding, you work is consistently amazing but this is one of the best of yours that I’ve read.
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I wrote this a year ago I guess and then as my previous blog got deleted I wrote it again.
Thank you for your genuine words Brett! Means a lot.
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No problem at all, your work is always a pleasure to read
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Oh, deeply humbled.
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I wonder why always your words takes to another world?!
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Is that a bad thing?😊
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NOO. this is something I crave for! I wait for you to post something like this so that i can travel through your words to the world of romance.😊
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Aww.
Man, you are really precious to me as well.
So much love and hugs to you.☺
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😅*hugs back*
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Me*
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Such raw passion…that fervent yearning…such passionate verses❤❤
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Hi there!
Thank you for leaving such a beautiful feedback.
I am glad you liked it dear.❤
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Wow, passionate write. Your colorful mind had coloured love… this is so uniquely written. Thanks for sharing.
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Hi!
It’s really my pleasure to share my emotion through my words.
Much thanks for appreciating it.:)
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I love your blog. Can’t stop reading
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Thank you so much.
You are more than welcome!☺
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The skilled lover can paint a body with the most vibrant colours. The sexual innuendo in this piece is stunning and breath taking. Your use of brush, colours, painting, a tight grip, finger-painting imagery, all captivate the romantic and sensual side of the reader’s persona. Your prose is as fierce as your poetry, burning deep from within you. I don’t think I have ever read such a beautiful piece on love making, as you have penned here. Devika, you truly are a formidable artist, capable of painting the most vivid and profound images with your words. That is your gift! I LOVE this!!!!!
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