Tara remembers her doings. The pale kitchen sink speaking of chipped dreams, tectonic thighs of fidgeting swamp. Her lipstick is all nude today. Nude as the man of her dreams, saliva draped carefully between the folds of her lips.
And her purse sliding between her perfect round bosom. She wears sunrise as her makeup, with gleaming colors of a portrait. A hue of morning yawn. Her methods are clairvoyant. She sweeps a floor, performing a geometry to meet her desires, back & forth.
A bowl full of summer rains. Tara is a madhouse, today. Her cotton saree slipping on the floor, almost swaying the mosaic squares of the floor. She runs like a fever in a house. Moist enough to hold and gulp. An insouciant flower of the Himalayas. She would shove all the flickering desires, like the peels of onion and garlic in the bin. Not giving care.
Tara goes off to another house now. Pinning and swirling her hair with a bobby pin once again and she sweeps the floor again. A house so porous. Almost like a slice of starlight.
Beautiful!
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Thankyou, Lily.
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You are a great poetess. Moving piece. Truly lovely.
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I am so touched. Thank you
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Beautiful wordplay, amazing imagery. I absolutely loved it! 🙂
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Means a lot.
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Simply beautiful 💕
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Thank you.
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Whenever I read something like this, an unknown voice takes ovel, it’s like someone is narrating the play for me. I like this feeling
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Wow! What a beautiful compliment. Thank you Ankit
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You deserve it.
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What amazing wordplay – you can be a great novelist – I love Tara
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Fascinating and mysterious, I love this 🙂
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🙏🙏
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so descriptive
and I love her Tara
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I love her too.:)
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Wow, quite smooth and beautiful way to portray a character. Keep writing!
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Thank you.
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Excellent, Devika.
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Thanks, love.
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Really clever. You may have discovered a new genre of writing here. Great job as per usual xx
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Maybe, prose is something that I love to do.
Thanks, mate.
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Excellent poem !! You really swept me under the carpet !!
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You are being kind.:)
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Wow
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🙂
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Very nice!
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beautiful
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Thanks.
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I LOVE THIS!! ❤️
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💜💜
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‘wears the sunrise as her makeup’ how beautiful, and apt. loved the post.
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Thankyou.
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Beautiful imagery. I loved it. Thank you.
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Thank you.
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Tara is on a magical journey of dreams, passion, and desire and you have penned her beautifully. I loved this narrative poetry from you, Devika. I guess I have read one more from you a couple of months back.
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Yrs, i have done more prose.:)
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No I meant was writing around a character
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Such a beautiful imagery……. splendid
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Jeez I’m in LOVE with Tara ❤❤❤
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👌👌👌👌👌👌
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🙏🙏
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🙏✌
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Hello I’m projectillogic as of today I have 39 songs at http://www.soundcloud.com/projectillogic I used to be on reverb Nation but they stopped letting me upload new songs at reverb and at reverb these are the song reviews I had in my press kit
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