my dress is an Ocean of your orange skin,
the soft lullabies, tapping beneath the arms
joining cities of lust, a blue tip of tongue knowing
the pits of this coal lowlands,
it started with your wet tongue, caressing my lips
mouth like a band of tendons, tobacco burning in the palms.
your scripted hands, your oil dripping scripted hands,
they are imaginary lines in my mind.
thunder simmers in my skull, whitening the black
the deep-rooted balmy glass of kiss, stains and cigars.
Lemon and peeper sound, we sink in the moments of this.
and somehow you made me grow, preserving, pickling
beneath the dome heart of your nail,
I grew.
i grew like a sun.
p.s- please keep up with me even if I am unable to reply your comments as of now.
Someday I will take you out to coffee, Devika, and we will talk of life, loss, and love!
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Oh love, I would love to do that. You are such a sweetheart.❤️❤️❤️
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This is beautiful! And I love your new profile picture ❤ you're gorgeous.
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Hey you beautiful, thank you.
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Oh my! Such passion in every words. I had goosebumps while reading it.
It’s really attractive. 😊
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I love your kind words.❤️
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My pleasure. 😊
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Hello there, I nominated you for the Bloggers Chums Award. Here’s the link
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Thank you. You have lifted up my dead spirits.❤️
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I am happy to make you feel that way. That meant a lot to me! Thanks to you too! 😊❤
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Sensually perfect D.❤️
I love your gravatar. Beautiful.🌼
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Thank you my dear.
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This is beautiful!❤
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Aww.
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Sensual, gorgeous, brilliant. We sink into the moment and somehow you made me grow. Bravo.
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We need to grow. Like fungus, like breaths slipping. Mouths soaked in raisins. We need to grow.
You truly understand the essence, thank you so much Andrew.
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We must learn to grow and learn from our triumphs and tragedies, even from our heartbreaks. You are an amazing poet.
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Lovely, Devika
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Thanks girl.
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Thank you MVS. This one is so beautiful and passionate.
Don’t worry about responding, as we know you care anyway and we can hear it.
But please post as often as your time permits
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So sensuous. You have painted such a desirous picture
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Thank you Shantanu, writing after a week now.
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I see that. And you are back with a alluring sensuous bang 😊
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Kind! Thank you.
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My pleasure
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So sensual! Ideal for this hot afternoon.
And I am surely keeping up.
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Aww. You are the sweetest!
Thank you for this love.❤️
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Amazing beauty🌷💕
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Aww.
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Very nice poem!
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Thank you.
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Your welcome
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Total brilliance
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Thank you love
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Yet again you’ve successfully mesmerized me with a beautiful poem. 💘
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Thanks N.
Love you!
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And you are back. Great poetry. You are the epitome of sensual writings. 👌
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Ah really? Thanks you Ankan.
Hope you are well.
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Yes absolutely you are. And yeah I am hanging on you know.
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Nice
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Thanks!
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Your welcome!
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Excellent poem 👍 romance expressed with courage and determination !
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Thanks!
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I love your use of imagery in each poem, everything sounds so perfect and fits together so wonderfully. Great work !
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You are too kind
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Well wonderful work does deserves appreciation 🙂
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Thanks!!
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❤️❤️❤️
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Sensuous and gorgeous. and how it helps us to grow.Beautiful piece, Devika.
“and somehow you made me grow, preserving, pickling”..beautiful..we savor the love, cherish and it helps us grow.
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Aww. You are a beautiful poet, M
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There is something so unique and connecting in your writing
I feel like I am actually flowing in the ocean of the feeling your words being the waves taking up and down. wow
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Aww dear you have just made me humbled now.
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You deserve everything beautiful
💕
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So beautiful, evoking such imagery!
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Means a lot.
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I already commented on this one, but my God. It is just as sensual and glorious the second time around.
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Ah, now ain’t you the kindest!! And I hope you are doing well?
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All good. Keep inspiring us.
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Your gift of making everything sound and feel like a fever dream never ceases to amaze me. ♥️
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Woah. That’s a beautiful thing to say. I am Touched.
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I’m being sincere, too. You’re so talented. The pleasure is mine!
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I am crying.❤️❤️
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It’s okay to cry! I just hope they’re the happy kind! ♥️
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How sensual in a deep and surrealism way. Your way of writing pierces our dreams in such a delightful way. 🙂
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Yes, yes!! That is what makes me satisfied 🙏
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You are welcome my friend. 🙂
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