perhaps i got caught between your silk fingers,
gently throwing the vomit away,
petals of lips brushing away,
swaying like thunders.
perhaps, i slipped into you
before time,
before spring could collapse on my belly,
time sticks too many collection.
i am bloodlust,
caffeine on the stove, incensed.
expanding like perforated sky
only to melt like never before.
a stretch of copper sky,
hips full of smoke & nostalgia.
perhaps i loved you way too much.
give me a moment erupting like shreds of golden mirror,
honey dripped touch,
mouths swallowing a sweet lie of ours.
something like that, but real.
gorgeous piece β€
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Awwβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Just utterly raw and rich and wonderful….
You, my friend, know how to perfectly weave the words.
Thank you for doing so.
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Sorry for this late reply. But I tri am grateful.
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No worries! My pleasure!
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Don’t know where to start here. Pure poetic flow with hints of darkness but flickers of longing. Beautiful
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You have praised me enough πΉ
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Okay
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a sweet concoction of emotions.A love to savor, a love to hate.
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Hey, missed your comment. Thank you.
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No worries.
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Whenever you get it, share some of it, will you? π
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Beautiful β€οΈ
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Thanks
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Welcome
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Truly
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Powerful diction and punching consanance, nicely done.
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I appreciate your kind words.
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Two best lines:
caffeine on the stove, incensed.
a stretch of copper sky
Both of them are sooo iconic, really nice @MyValiantSoul
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Thank you for reading this.
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Powerful.
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Means a lot
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Your work and this poetic flow has a touch of darkness and a heart full of surrealism of brilliance. π
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ππ
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π π
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Love it ππ
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Thank you Victoria.
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Truly incredible.
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Thanks a lot for your kind words .
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My pleasure.
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Tell you what, give me poetry like this!!! Kudos, D!
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I will, wait for my book. Ahem.
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Oh wow
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Couldn’t understand entirely but rich stuff
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Beautiful as always on words & i hope everything is great on your endπ
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It is all fine here. Hope the same for you.π
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βπ
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