i do not hallucinate time and your levitating skin bluish words, bluish eyes of Meraki, i count the scars on the nape of your neck infinite scalds of heaven pulling life backwards and forwards. You have an impatient mouth sundial beds of petunia faltering sheets of sunbathed sheets, you prick my lips like a landslide romancing Moon, surreal. I am awake as i fall i fall and i am awake swans of a churlish period. we took needles in our mouth stirring and shaking producing spring again and again. silver hum of nights dissolving, in the orange casket of my ovary.
© Words MVS
Love this piece! I especially loved “you prick my lips
like a landslide romancing Moon,
surreal.” How awesome is that line, jammed packed of imagery? 💕🌸
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Yes, it’s awesome if you say so.
Thank you so much.❤️
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words…molten lava…nice…
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What a beautiful piece. Your poems are like some artistry rendition with bold colors shining bright
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What a beautiful piece. Your writing is like artistry with bold colors shining bright
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Oh my! Such a great comment.🙏
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You are must welcome
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This is an absolutely Exquisite poem!!!!!!
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Oh my! This is one fascinating poem.
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Yiee❤️❤️
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So beautiful,
Impatient mouth mmm, mmm, mm
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I have tried to write poetry. If ever I could do it this well, I would do it only.
Tim
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Aww thanks Tim.
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Thought inspiring & truth perspiring !👏👏
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Thank you.
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Oh my..As I read on, this piece tasted like rosewater, cloves and a violet sunset over a turquoise lagoon.
What a pen you hold, VS!
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Such amazing lines you said. Wow.
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Such amazing poetry you pen *smiles*
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Thank you.
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Metaphorically inspiring! I love your mind–creative and wild. Well done!
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Thank you love
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Aha..you have such a different and unique perception about love and romance and also lovemaking. There is so much vivid imagery. You never fail to combine pain with love when writing about love.
I have never read anyone writing so beautifully about the kiss as you do.
“we took needles in our mouth
stirring
and shaking
producing spring again and again.”
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Such a beautiful remark.
Thank you for this.
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it’s very expressive.. and very well composed .. just the right force, without making it too much.. loved it 🙂
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Thanks.
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good one.👍
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I probably would have missed this, but not to be.
For a change, I am reading all the comments and feel proud of us who can read and enjoy the beautiful poetry
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