Inspired by- Eavan Boland
A balcony.
Brewed tea. Things are getting ready.
a neighbour folds her dried out clothes.
Another vendor strolls across the streets.
Oranges and papayas , he screams.
Stars and moon,
things become raw at night.
Opaque tunes of the clouds distorting,
things pause as the sun sets in.
This moment,
a women walks in the kitchen
to get things ready for dinner.
A bizzare hustle,
Fruits ripening,
An old painting getting chipped.
This moment.
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Thatβs beautiful!!!
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I am thrilled you like it.:)
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You have golden fingers.
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Oh really, we both should so something together in that case.:)
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Indeed ..
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Wow! β£οΈ
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Each moment is beautiful in its own unique way. Wonderful!
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Thank you!
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Loved the picture. .
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Why can’t I see your account?
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Why …? it’s there …
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I cant visit it. Please see.
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Breath-taking writing yet again! I found the imagery evocative of time’s passage, with the repeated line reminding me of what it feels like to try and grasp onto those tiny moments of purity and reflection. Fantastic reading. π
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Ripe with emotion.
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I am happy, you are enjoying my work.
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Always a pleasure
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The picture is cute wild. Poem is very well written. Congrats π
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Well expressed….
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Thanks.
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I love the moment
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You painted a snapshot of life so vivid with images and mood. Well done!
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Hi.
I am glad you enjoyed this. Thankyou for saying such kind words.:)
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I plan to use this poem in a writing circle. I believe it will inspire others to write about what they are experiencing in the moment. I will be crediting you with a link back to your blog. Thank you.
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I will be more than honoured. Thank you.
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I am so bad with appreciating! But sooo beautiful π
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Anyhow, I get your love always.:)
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Wonderful
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