
The dialogues of life,
cold and tiny
making my bosom collapse at night,
with white nakedness of velvet sky
and the paper sniffing my skin,
a hard yawn of the afternoon,
a dark spot on the skin-
The dialogue of life
to my springs, to my sharp scandal of the eye.
This it. This is she.
A massive sea beneath the hand,
beneath your mouth,
a massive ocean
with softness of mornings
This is she, between the eye of sunsets happening.
Links to buy my poetry collection Crimson Skins - here
Available on Barnes and Noble, Book Depository as well.
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my valiant soul
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
Curator of Olive Skins.
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Beautiful words of sensuality❤️
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Thank you
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Beautiful depiction! I love it. 💜
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Thankyou beautiful:)
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wowww!! you poetry is so beautifully sensual and amazing. I just love it.
btw, I wanted to ask you something if its not too much trouble. you can choose to ignore this message altogether if you dont want to answer. but you are pretty popular on wordpress. and I find it extremely hard to get liked or views on my posts without liking other peoples post. and I wanted to ask you, since you are pretty experienced in this, do you think that…liking other people’s post is the only way to get some recognition here? again, you can choose to ignore this altogether if you want, but I thought it was worth the shot.
thank you, in advance, for at least reading
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Hi-
Thank you for appreciating my words!
And to answer your question..no, that is not the only way to engage an audience for your blog. I never wrote for likes, comments, no! I have been writing for some couple of years now. It is a consistent process.
At the end, your mind should feel happy after writing a piece that you truly want to express, who cares about the likes?! But yes, you need to show some genuine, organic engagement with other fellow bloggers as well.
Also, I am not an popular face here. People have shown me enough love and gratitude, for I am just a passing star, maybe.
Hope this helps! All the best.
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popular or not, you are one of the best honestly. your poetry has inspired me a lot. more than that, thank you from the bottom of my heart for answering. seriously, it means a lot. and yet again, you inspire me again, I do understand that you have to engage and i want to but I also dont want to base it all on this one thing. its good to realize that that is possible. thank you for answering again.
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Great last line!
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Thank you so much.
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Beautiful and mysterious too
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Thankyou.:)
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I’ve re-posted this as well. 🙂
https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/09/09/the-dialogue-of-life-my-valiant-soul/
Thanks for sharing, and hope your book reaches many.
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Thank you.
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Written with a feather, soft, soothing, and sensual. utilizing the language of nature provides a scenic pleasantry..
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Means a lot.:)
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Magnificent
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Thankyou 🙂
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You’re welcome ✨
You wrote from your heart.
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Not all things happen the way we sometimes plan. Maybe randomness is the new order? Loved this. 😇
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Why should it happen like so? The fun will be ruined.
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Maybe….
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’with white nakedness of velvet sky’. Loved these lines👌👌. Magnificent piece☺️.
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Thank you Shayra.:)
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It’s my pleasure. Will you do one favour?
I am hesitating to ask but it will help me a lot. Would you give your honest feedback on my posts so that I could improve?
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Sure darl.
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But I cant access your blog.
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Are the posts not visible?
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Sadly, no.
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But, how others commented on it? I was not aware of this problem. If posts not visible then how could you like it?
I am confused, what’s the exact issue
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I did not lile any of your posts recently. Might be some glitch.
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Okay. I will check it. Thanks for informing☺️
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I think you are not following my blog that’s why it’s not appearing there. I have seen in the settings and checked the site too. Seems everything okay
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Dear, I am following you. If I click your website I see something else. Send me the link to your blog here please.
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Okay. https://aethist.wordpress.com
Let me know whether you could access or not. I will try to fix it.
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Yes! Finally, I could.:)
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Glad to hear that ☺️
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An ode to the senses, nice!
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Thank you so much.:)
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