I imagine the day like a face of a woman,
the mornings so much defined
with exposures and brightness,
polaroids of crimson sky
and the heaviness comes like her mind,
i can paint this lady on my canvas,
yawns in the afternoons,
doping shadows
watching the food vividly left in the kitchen
she knows nobody
but a raisin stuck to her mouth
The flower would lust water by evening
and the lady would nurture it,
each color so distinct,
each seed – a subservience
each leaf unfolding unique stories
by night, light fades away
into a shade of something darker
of gentle strokes disappearing
flooding her mouth, her memories with aesthetics.
The heaviness puts her arm into a state of nostalgia
a perfect blend of papers & ink.
But then we know how things end
with a flustered love for trees,
half filled glass of all things love.z
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So beautiful. I loved it.
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Thank you, Amartya
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Delicate, like lace.
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Oommphhβ₯οΈ
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This is so beautiful. πππ
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Apologies for my absence. I have been struggling with so many issues.
Reading this profound piece made me feel like I havenβt read poetry in months.
MVS donβt know how it is possible. You always keep your writing so fresh, so new and inspiring. xo
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It’s okay. We all can try taking things slow. Hope you are better now.
Thank you for giving a glace to my work. I hope to produce more good work in the future too.
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This is sooo goodβ€
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Thanks dear.
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Beautiful
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Thanks.
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This is a deliciously evocative poem.
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Thank you so much.
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Amazing poetry by a talented writer.
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Hello dear poet. I enjoyed your work today and I hope you are doing well. Be safe and be careful my friend.
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so beautiful
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Hey!
Thanks a bunch.
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I love the analogies you used here. Day like the face of a woman, who would have thought of this other than you.π
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Hi you.
We all could relate and so can you.
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This is what you say observing someone from distance with everything she doing.
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Exactly!
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humbled. shared it.
https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/05/25/the-face-of-a-woman-my-valiant-soul/
Thanks for posting.
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This is so so beautiful, I really liked the way you compiled ..
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“half-filled glass of all things”.. a poignant closing. I loved the way you have used a woman as a metaphor.
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Loved this…it’s not deep..but you impressed with beautiful metaphors … comparing the woman’s face with the daylight is soo beautiful β€οΈβ€οΈ..and then how vividly you expressed the features of day and the women…and you started telling her dialy routine in much realism and poetic way..it’s such a unique mixture of your writing..by the afternoon the yawns and raisnin in throat..and vividly expressing about the left over food…this is such a different way of writing about woman and her afternoon lunch…that’s brilliant…I mean only few who has command over the body mind and writing can only do that with ease..and the the lines plants listing the wate and women nurturing it..and.thennyiu didn’t stopped..you told about the details of plant…and the last one about nights..how you feel heavy…yes everyone does that but refekcting that heavy thoughts into arm and spilling throu hand on paper with ink was one very good way of expressing…this is another brilliant piece I liked ..I am actually searching for more if the depth in this piece..but still I really enjoyed it
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