What becomes out of a light that perches on the shade?
A coma or a complete sentence?
Does a wound heal if exposd to a skin’s love?
What becomes of a translucent onion that can not be further minced?
A life comes with a moment of quietness through the lens of wet eye.
A doctor’s favourite fruit is perhaps death and a game meddling with his blue arm.
My front doors are always open / so that I may see vintage skyline opening up it’s tongue to dissolve my small limbs into it’s
system.
A gramophone that listens up my cries at the night.
What shall happen to my knuckles once they float in the air?
Oh, don’t be scared right now.. (atleast not for sometime).
I have walls painted in the color of blood, the golden hour of melting pain
The paradoxes of life have a strange sniff attached to it. Life takes no side, it slips in terror and terror. I stare at a flower, and I ask what about you?
Will you live or remain isolated?
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That bad?
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No buddy . Its extremly living …Its live …Its beautiful.
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Oh, thank you.
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Your words a life and surrealism to its fullest of beauty. 🙂
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Nice , Illusionary.
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Love the thoughts and questions you pose in this Val
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Thank you
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Very nice poem, and deep
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Incredibly beautiful one MVS.💙
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♥️
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“The paradoxes of life have a strange sniff attached to it. Life takes no side, it slips in terror and terror. I stare at a flower, and I ask what about you?
Will you live or remain isolated?”
The paradox of life and we are stuck between the dichotomy of our emotions, should we stay or leave??
Your poetry leaves me with a plethora of questions
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Waaah..the starting line itself is such a beauty..the word perches in the shade..imagery is peaks..🔥…
I love the way how you compared the healing process of wound to love of a skin so beautiful…and form then the DEVIKA NESS if I can say or orefer to say just ride us to the deeps of protic oceans…the void in the onions..how beautifully you expressed..and expressimg death to a fruit?? 👍👍👍👍👍👍..wow..and next line was really my favourite one sky opening it’s tongue to swallow limb❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ just brilliant….and scary thought of ghost in the next line..and then after few lines poem ends by questionning the flower and it’s loneliness… amazed
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Sorry I forgot about the line sniff…**this is one more favourite line…as usual ..take a bow
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