1
the first is a spot
through which a night shines
the first is a mouth like a spot
or a spot like a mouth,
this confusion happens to me through the atrocities of words,
the glass beads
of unspoken talks
2
The second is blurred.
a garage of broken lives.
broached interpretations
mark of a garden path,
pale figures of God
3
The third is the grass
you sit here in the colony of ants,
through retractive light,
hopping and walking across centuries,
you become like a shape- shifter,
a brilliant one.
4
the fourth is an Elegy
through the thick of fabric
of the night, you become so bright
suddenly, not any sad song now.
Not anymore.
And you slip from the corners of your mouth,
slipping like an elegy
slipping like a song
Cities are of no one
and I too have no place.
Partially inspired by-`Agnes Nemes Nagy
Nicely done. I thin k you meant ‘fourth’ in the fourth stanza and not ‘third’
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Thank you and yes, i have corrected it. It happens when you are writing along with multi tasking.
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You’re welcome. I know what you mean and I thought you might like to know – I know I would.
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Beautifully penned.
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Humbled.:)
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this is so good
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Thank you:)
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Happy holidays Val
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I absolutely loved this. I loved the way you have approached this and the structure.
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