Is it still there?
The sound of trespassers,
of purple rains and sweet smell.
A cloud that swings words up in the sky
a hardened shell of a life,
There is a beautiful cottage that I see in my dreams
full of centipedes, vintage mahogany chairs.
A sound travels me up there
in between the unreal beauty of soil.
Life unfurls in the corners of my room,
my small used rooms,
forever palpitating,
my hand roams, kissing the aesthetics of nature,
here,
I dissolve my tongue,
rubbing my elbows,
again and again.
to spit surreal poetry.
My house slips in my dreams like a flower
trapping, my body like silk.
And I would stay here.
Wow! This is fantastic.
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Hi, Lorraine.
Thank you:)
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Hi Devika an excellent and remarkable poem !! 👍 are you busy these days ? Miss your presence!
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Yes, i am trying to balance a lot of things these days. I write on Instagram too.
🙂
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That’s great news 👍
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Amazing 😊
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Amazing 😊
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,,🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Stunning with a touching gentleness, I felt.
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How kind.
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Beautiful writing Val
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The imagery is compelling! I am reading your poem over and over again. Home is where the heart is the popular saying; someone’s dream house is symbol of their psyche or perhaps soul. I’m wondering, who or what was the trespasser. Not that I need to know here, the poem works – imho.
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It means so much to me.
Thank you for such graceful words. I am not sure what made me write this though now. Too many thoughts, you know!
🙂
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Always in awe of your work, you have a unique voice and a gift for drawing the reader into your world. I can’t pick a favourite line with this one but I felt that this passage was particularly worth noting:
“I dissolve my tongue,
rubbing my elbows,
again and again.
to spit surreal poetry.”
Keep the surreal stuff flowing 🙂
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I shall always keep my stuff flowing, atleast i will try to.
Thank you for your time and Lovely words:)
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so beautiful to read
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Hey, thanks a bunch.
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My absolute pleasure
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Awesome
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Magnificent poetic write. Packed with beautiful imagery. 🙂
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Hey!
Hope you are well. Thank you for your generosity, will be reading you asap.
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You are welcome my friend. 🙂
Hope you enjoy what you read from my experimental poetry. 🙂
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Beautiful !
Thank you
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Aww🙂
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Beautiful work!
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🙂
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Beautiful, D!
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I know its too late, a thank you note still on your way.
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Beautiful surrealistic poetry. You have again managed to capture the essence of dreams and the ease which it slips in our psyche. Loved reading this one, D
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