The Look


I remember the absurdness of clouds spread over my head, hovering. Blue lilies dancing in the sky. A quiet place of porous Gods. I would stare at the sky, releasing my chemical reactions in the thin air. My orange vase neck, oscillating between the concrete human eye and the prism of soil. I would name it Illusion.
Phonetic switch of moonflowers and blurred windowpanes. I saw it all.

At times, I would be a God myself, walking through the soil where the humans sew each other, excavating noises. Annihilation of a cold muse in the sky.
There are shapes and humans walking up above, flickering heir worldly eyes. I have it all,
in my pockets full of moaning psalms,
rolling down my sliding cheeks.
I carry a piece of everything, everywhere I travel.


  1. This is such a brilliant work…🔥🔥..”Blue lollies dancing in sky”comparison with blue clouds hovering is damnnnnnnn..
    And again doing the same with ” porous god’s” superb .
    And ” releasing chemical reaction into the sky” you are unique with these lines….i always love how you keep these scientific kind of things into poetic way…♥️♥️…
    “Oscillating between human and concrete soil..” woww…i don’t know how deep you think while writing these.kind of lines…only few writers can think like that…it’s a gift…
    In the second paragraph..” humans sewing Each other” ending with i carry every piece , everywhere”… recently I am not getting time to read your blog poems…..but this one i really’s always a learning experience to improve my skills and imagination and how to think like you….. Absolutely awesome devika

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  2. oh my..this just took my breath away. So so beautifully written. Every lin is poem in itself. I’m coming back to drench in its beauty again. I so missed reading your poems. Everything was crazy busy and I don’t want to rush read your poem. They deserve more than this.

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