i am the woman
the goddess of springs and words.
watch me rise.,
through threads of raisin
like a vintage blob of sun,
a phoenix from ashes.
My mouth is covered with cellophane
of rust skins,
it knows how to unwrap of sins,
a murderous night,
Watch this body of cold moon,
a silent night made of quiet mountains.
Observe and stay with me,
I throttle along with the rivers,
I provide and love,
like a goddess of all time.
I love these lines the best:
“Watch this body of cold moon,
a silent night made of quiet mountains.
Observe and stay with me,
I throttle along with the rivers,
I provide and love,
like a goddess of all time.”
Such strength and attention to detail in them. Great work, Devika!
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Thank you tre.
I feel i am getting cliched now.
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We all get a little “cliched” from time to time. It’s still good writing.
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You said it right there!
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Wonderful, a beautiful piece of writing!
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Beautiful like you:)
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I mean REALLY beautiful, sweet lady. β€
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I meant the same:)
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too sweet β€
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Really cool poetry
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I miss reading your dark surrealism poetic brilliance. π
This one is my favorite. π
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Yes, a million times over. Short lines saturated in truths. Brilliant work!
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Humbled
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Loved it β€
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My pleasure
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beautiful writing!
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Thank you so much.
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