a prayer so soft
I mumble each time
There is a method I perform my chants
like sticking to the table,
thumping my wrist against my forehead.
I wish to sneeze while praying
to eject sins,
a horror bowl that rests between my toes,
twirling softly and eating me bite by bite.
My prayers are often lullabies.
Muted voices
you scavenge while dreaming.
I pray
and pray
and pray
to sniff a piece of hope.
I do speak in four voices
that swirls my lock of hair.
Goosebumps now.
I repeat my prayers when I am a shadow of a fallen sky
a bird that refuses to watch me.
nature has its way to corner from the human.
Without a shard of primrose,
A scourge of shaved earth.
And I change places
to chant
to sleep
to pray
till I see a circumference of white powder
there, inside my mind
blooming the entire prayer
in colors of myth and violet rain.
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Soft and rhythmic! A beautiful poem. Or should I say a beautiful way to describe prayer!
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Thank you Rashi.
Love to you!
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My pleasure!❤
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In a way I think you are addressing not just how you might think but are asking the deeper questions about what is prayer. Is there a belief system that leads us to pray, do we expect a response, if so from what. I like your construction and it reads easily. Well done for putting it this way. 🙂
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I don’t know whether we want a response or not, but a prayer often gives a hope. It may be heard or it may not be heard. At least it’s a way we can confess our deeds to God. The rest is upon him/ her.
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This so profound…….. sneezing to eject sins ……such beautiful words
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Thank you dear soul.
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My pleasure
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Damn beautiful – a serene prayer of thoughts, words and faith
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A winderful way to describe lrayer Devika. I say that even a scream is prayer
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Yes, a scream is a prayer!!!
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I know. As is a roar lol
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Thank you for your beautiful writing
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Beautiful
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❤️
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The voices in your poetry screams of the dark arts. Not in the sense of Raven and Crows but us in dark caves.
Love, as usual, Devika Di!
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Even if it is a prayer, I will speak a dark prayer. How about that, lol?
Thank you Siddharth.
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Hahaha… You specialize in the dark arts!
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Soft and a lovely prayer indeed
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It is. Thanks, dear.
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”I repeat my prayers when I am a shadow of a fallen sky
a bird that refuses to watch me.”
Wonderful lines.
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Thank you.
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Beautiful piece and flowing lines
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🙏
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“till I see a circumference of white powder
there, inside my mind
blooming the entire prayer
in colors of myth and violet rain.” This for me is the essence of the poem. The soul of prayer, the necessity for its existence.
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Hi Megha, sorry for late replies. But you have given all your love on my Poetry. Thanks a ton, love.❤️
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Always a pleasure to read your words my sweet poetess.I was away for too long.
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Well express, I love the poem
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Oh my. This is one of the most beautiful poems I have read all year. This gentle write poured out of your heart. ONe can read it again and again, and be mesmerized every time.
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I am all low actually, and reading your sweet words make me feel a little better.
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Sorry, to hear that. Your writing is always creative and inspiring. Hope the rest of the week gets better for you.
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I hope things go well
Thank you for your wishes.
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I admire your amazing work. Wouldn’t wanrt anyhting to disturb your creativity. Although I suspect you would write beautiful dark poetry.
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Wow!
Revealing our true nature in prayer frees us. 🙏
Thanks
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